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The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game
« on: January 28, 2016, 02:14:36 PM »
We currently sit at a grand total of 54 cards.

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The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game« on: January 28, 2016, 02:14:36 PM »
We currently sit at a grand total of 54 cards.
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The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game« on: January 28, 2016, 01:56:30 PM »I'm out of ideas in terms of extra cards. The Anonymous card was the only good one I had. I like the question mark. 7953
Gaming / Re: Star Wars Battlefront DLC announced« on: January 28, 2016, 01:28:15 PM »Wow, they nerfed Scan Pulse to fucking oblivion, and now it's pretty much useless. Some of the Star Cards they nerfed were doing just fine. The hitbox is weird and positioned just behind the engines, or something. 7954
Gaming / Anyone have Dark Souls 2 on PS4, fancy doing a co-op run?« on: January 28, 2016, 01:24:49 PM »
Figured it might be fun to do a co op run with someone here. My PSN is GurrenSwagann, if anyone's up for it.
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The Flood / Re: Captain Stardust: A sci fi story in progress« on: January 28, 2016, 01:21:22 PM »the first paragraph is solid, imo. if you were to transition that 'small spec of dust can cause huge change' theme into the history and world building in the next 4 paragraphs which is what im assuming you're doing (havent read past P5), then on to your main story potentailly.by using 3rd person you already effectively have a narrator "telling" the story already.in the prologue you switched to 2nd person in the second paragraph then went back to 3rd in the next. it bugs me. ill come back and read this in more detail in a bit. The speck of dust thing was more of an analogy about the smallest thing being able to make a massive change, which is gonna happen in the story, to kind of give a hint about the kind of thing that's going to happen. And I wanna make sure it's solid because I'd like to be a writer eventually so I need to make sure it works. 7956
The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game« on: January 28, 2016, 01:11:43 PM »
Tome to count dis bitch
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The Flood / Re: ITT: Things that aren't that funny, but still make you crack up anyway« on: January 28, 2016, 01:06:38 PM »![]() 7958
The Flood / Re: Captain Stardust: A sci fi story in progress« on: January 28, 2016, 01:05:00 PM »by using 3rd person you already effectively have a narrator "telling" the story already.in the prologue you switched to 2nd person in the second paragraph then went back to 3rd in the next. it bugs me. ill come back and read this in more detail in a bit. Hmm alrighty. I'm not even sure if I want to keep those first two paragraphs in the prologue anyway, or just jump straight into the history. 7959
Gaming / Re: Dark Souls Impressions: Update #5.0 - Overcoming My Demons (page 20)« on: January 28, 2016, 12:57:49 PM »dpwhat is this cryptic-ass shit It's what he's into 7960
Gaming / Re: Dark Souls Impressions: Update #5.0 - Overcoming My Demons (page 20)« on: January 28, 2016, 12:57:27 PM »
Spoiler He's pretty easy to lure out and he only has one attack, plus he doesn't really leave the tower so you can keep poking him from the doorway. He's left the tower a few times to attack me, though but he runs back shortly afterwards. 7961
The Flood / Re: What movie (s) should I watch from my collection?« on: January 28, 2016, 12:53:56 PM »hot fuzz Mmm. Hot Fuzz is hilarious, Pacific Rim never gets boring and I've yet to actually watch Seven... 7962
The Flood / Re: Captain Stardust: A sci fi story in progress« on: January 28, 2016, 12:51:31 PM »in the prologue you switched to 2nd person in the second paragraph then went back to 3rd in the next. it bugs me. ill come back and read this in more detail in a bit. Yeah the first part of the prologue is meant to be like someone telling the reader that. 7963
The Flood / Re: What movie (s) should I watch from my collection?« on: January 28, 2016, 12:49:23 PM »The Cornetto Trilogy Not a massive fan of The World's End 7964
Gaming / Re: Some new Dark Souls 3 screenshots« on: January 28, 2016, 12:47:48 PM »But it'd also be weird to take out one of the more popular good co-op group out of the game.What's wrong with it? It's in the same universe.I don't want them rehashing old stuff like Sunbros for fanservice but it would be nice to get some throwbacks to the lore. Maybe a mention or an item description here and thereThe Praise the Sun gesture is in the game Eh, I know there's not much point in leaving it in there because it works well, but I'm always into seeing what new things they could add, even if it was just making a new Covenant that functions in the same way. 7965
The Flood / What movie (s) should I watch from my collection?« on: January 28, 2016, 12:39:47 PM »
Pick up to three I should watch. I can't decide. I'll watch the most popular ones.
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The Flood / Re: Captain Stardust: A sci fi story in progress« on: January 28, 2016, 12:27:09 PM »
Chapter 10
Spoiler They made their way back to the landing platform shortly after, with Hollo and his son leading the way. Hollo was telling his child about where he was going and what was expected of him, though Hal reassured him it would be just fine. Jeff hoped that he’d never accidentally punch him again, and was already making a list of things he’d need to show and teach him. After all, it’s not every day you adopt an alien child, and Jeff wanted to make sure he hit all the right notes. The sky was overcast as they climbed to the top of the platform and there was a light drizzle, but Hal and Jeff barely noticed. Hollo handed Hal a relatively small sized pouch containing a heap of credits, explaining that the it had been a ‘gift from the gods’. There will still other Hollites around the area so he had to make sure to keep up the religious act. “Goodbye, child!” Hollo called as Jeff boarded the ship, clutching the large, clear container that Hollo’s son was floating happily in. Hal remained on the platform to speak to Hollo quietly, though he took care not to look suspicious. “I’ll tell him soon, I promise. I don’t know how he’ll take it, probably badly. But I gotta do it.” Hal smiled warmly at Hollo. “Well, we’re off then! Nice meeting you Hollo, glad we could help. Hope you figure out whatever you’re looking for, we’ll visit again!” Hollo held out his hand, and Hal took it. Unexpectedly, Hollo wrapped his hand around Hal’s and began to shake it. He had finally mastered the greeting. His hand was oddly warm and gooey, a pleasant sensation enveloped Hal’s arm all the way up to his shoulder. “Thank you, Mister Hal. I am glad that you helped. I hope my son has a good time with you,” he said while looking directly into Hal’s eyes. Hal waved his goodbye and boarded the Maria, closing the automatic door behind him. Taking off his jacket and wrapping it around the back of his chair, he sat down with a sigh. He could hear Jeff somewhere in the background, talking to Hollo’s child, no doubt filling his head with all sorts of nonsense. As he flicked all the switches and the ship began to hum with power, he looked out of the window to see Hollo still standing there, watching. Hal gave him a brief nod and a smile then flicked the switch to lift the ship up into the air, where it rose slowly. Ascending through the clouds, tiny specks of rain began to hit and drip down the windows, reminding Hal that he needed to add window wipers to the list of things that needed fixing on the ship. The ship continued to climb, finally breaching the atmosphere and emerging into the deep, dark vastness of space. Hal gazed out at the star-filled landscape, and smiled to himself, wondering just where they would end up next. 7967
Gaming / Re: Dark Souls Impressions: Update #5.0 - Overcoming My Demons (page 20)« on: January 28, 2016, 12:23:17 PM »
Spoiler I dunno if he's actually gonna go to the basement. Havel's not too bad if you keep poking him with a Gold Pine Resin'd Spear. 7968
Gaming / Re: Dark Souls Impressions: Update #5.0 - Overcoming My Demons (page 20)« on: January 28, 2016, 12:22:13 PM »any boss with a title and healthbar does not respawnI'm convinced they originally intended to make Bridge Drake a required boss fight, couldn't find a way to make his design not be awful, and just scrapped him up to an obstacle and copy pasted Taurus in to make sure there was no long gap between bosses.yeah, that's what i expected, too Spoiler There's more Taurus Demons down below, should be fun. 7969
Gaming / Re: Some new Dark Souls 3 screenshots« on: January 28, 2016, 11:35:12 AM »What's wrong with it? It's in the same universe.I don't want them rehashing old stuff like Sunbros for fanservice but it would be nice to get some throwbacks to the lore. Maybe a mention or an item description here and thereThe Praise the Sun gesture is in the game I dunno, I'd rather them create new stuff than rehashing Sunbro stuff for fanservice. 7970
Gaming / Re: Some new Dark Souls 3 screenshots« on: January 28, 2016, 11:19:27 AM »I don't want them rehashing old stuff like Sunbros for fanservice but it would be nice to get some throwbacks to the lore. Maybe a mention or an item description here and thereThe Praise the Sun gesture is in the game :/ I guess that's acceptable... maybe 7971
The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game« on: January 28, 2016, 11:07:37 AM »So what course is this for boss? Illustration 7972
Gaming / Re: Star Wars Battlefront DLC announced« on: January 28, 2016, 11:04:32 AM »Wow, they nerfed Scan Pulse to fucking oblivion, and now it's pretty much useless. Some of the Star Cards they nerfed were doing just fine. Homing Shot and A-Wing were top of my nerf wishlist, I'm glad at least one of them got fixed 7973
The Flood / Re: Memories of Gatsby« on: January 28, 2016, 10:38:15 AM »
Spoiling an MGSV death and making us pissy
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Gaming / Re: Star Wars Battlefront DLC announced« on: January 28, 2016, 10:36:50 AM »The game is fun, that doesn't make star wars good.use metaphors from a good universe plsnohaven't seen the film yettow cable the ground pleaseFlyboys are cancer though.Jakku - Invisible collision located on the landed rebel transport shipTHANK GOD Do you not like the films, but like the universe, or... 7975
Gaming / Re: Some new Dark Souls 3 screenshots« on: January 28, 2016, 10:34:54 AM »
I don't want them rehashing old stuff like Sunbros for fanservice but it would be nice to get some throwbacks to the lore. Maybe a mention or an item description here and there
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The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game« on: January 28, 2016, 09:58:50 AM »Dear lord why does the teacup keep getting somehow worse Naw its ok, just looks pixxy as fook 7977
The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game« on: January 28, 2016, 09:56:27 AM »Oh wow 6000 posts Yeah totally 7978
Gaming / Re: Dark Souls Impressions: Update #5.0 - Overcoming My Demons (page 20)« on: January 28, 2016, 09:53:23 AM »
I usually save the gold pine resin for Spoiler Havel 7979
The Flood / Re: I'm designing a Sep7agon card game« on: January 28, 2016, 09:52:28 AM »
Oh wow 6000 posts
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