Peter never skips his nexercises.

Which program do you use again?


Same old shit from me again. At least I'm improving.

Quote from: Aether on May 30, 2017, 01:10:09 AM

Quote from: extreme mursuiting 1971 on May 28, 2017, 02:32:59 PM

Which program do you use again?


Same old shit from me again. At least I'm improving.

i think youre developing habits that actually makes the anatomy worse

the way you draw noses may look fine from the side but were you to draw a face that was facing the screen, how would you go about it

highlights from the eyes are supposed to come from one light source, it makes your eyes look cross-eyed if you give them separate directions unless the light source is close (then it would converge, but never diverge)



you also dont seem to understand the reason for the indent between the collar bones is the collar bones themselves, and tbh looking in the mirror would tell you this



necks also have an angled potrusion that goes down towards this indent, unlike the rectangular necks you draw



if youre drawing collar bones i at least suspect you want them to represent a human's so i would not say this is a stylistic choice; neck size and shape would be

your lines are good but i feel l ike youre getting worse with the faces, im not sure how many tutorials or things like that you look at but if there arent many other artists criticizing your work it could be self destructive to the learning process

theres a saying that goes learn the rules before you break them; if youre trying a similar style to kushinovs art, he did a lot of life drawing and still life before he started doing his own work, and maybe you wont notice it now, but it pays off, and youll see it in your art; then when you go to look back at your old stuff, namely these, youll know exactly what you did wrong

Props for the crits.

The highlight issue is a matter of sketching fast. The reason I say I see improvement is that the last sketch was done in maybe a quarter of the time I would usually take. I've been trying to achieve a comparable level in a much shorter amount of time. I guess so I can get down what I know quickly and move on to correcting what mistakes I'm making. I actually did notice that the left highlight on the eye was over slightly more left than the right was, but the difference wasn't so huge that it bothered me all that much in regards to what I was trying to accomplish anyways.

With shoulders and collar bones, it's a matter of me not practicing them because I run out of room, (I sketch too big, another thing I need to work on) so they just become a place holder to make the head look less floaty. I virtually always have an issue with them and sometimes just leave the head looking floaty anyways. I figure though I should at least try them, wrong as they are, to work towards figuring them out even if it's at a very slow pace for now. I didn't draw collar bones in that sketch literally because I didn't want to do it because I didn't think they would look any good. I just thought the area looked too empty without anything so I sketched the indent without them.

I realize I've got a long way to go with proportions and proper anatomy, so I will go over and try to remember everything you've said. You're literally the only person at all that looks at my shit critically, so thanks for real. It's actually something I long for pretty desperately.

Also, I'm not necessarily purposefully going for a style like kuvshinov's, he's just one inspiration among many for me, like Runshin, Filipe Aguiar, Ross Tran, Anthulu, the list goes on. I have more of an affinity for drawing rounder female faces, specifically the jaw line and the nose, ( I just love drawing flowing curves, even when I sketch graffiti) and I think that's why kushinov's work may influence me more than others.

Quote from: extreme mursuiting 1971 on May 28, 2017, 02:32:59 PM

Which program do you use again?


Same old shit from me again. At least I'm improving.

paint tool SAI

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im glad you took it well but some of this stuff you should work towards being able to do without even thinking about it when proper anatomy (stylized or not, you will be able to tell) becomes habit

not saying you only have one artist to go from, just giving an example, many of those artists will have had the same groundwork

Does a game created with other people count as art?

Quote from: Pepsi on May 31, 2017, 01:25:44 PM

That looks mad uncomfortable

shes floating in space

Quote from: Dietrich Six on May 31, 2017, 09:58:04 PM

Quote from: Pepsi on May 31, 2017, 01:25:44 PM

That looks mad uncomfortable

shes floating in space

Still tho

The Dark Supper

bat

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Quote from: extreme mursuiting 1971 on June 08, 2017, 07:34:50 PM

bat

Where da wings?

surgically removed by an oppressive government

Those animals