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« on: February 03, 2017, 07:23:55 PM »
You're too reliant on short, rapid-fire sentences. They're good for action scenes, but you need longer, descriptive paragraphs in there too. There's not enough detail to get a real sense of tension or horror, it's just one action after another with little to flesh it out. There'll be more impact if you have a few descriptive paragraphs before the action starts, but make sure to build up to it so it's not too abrupt. Maybe you could write about the place the protagonist is in for a paragraph or two, then describe what the antagonist is doing to make it clear that they're about to fight or run away or something, then start the short-sentence action scene.
Also, knock it off with that capitalizing "Him" for emphasis. That shit's annoying.
1022
« on: February 03, 2017, 07:05:59 PM »
Kinky.
1023
« on: February 03, 2017, 07:00:13 PM »
i watched some anime over the past month
i didn't enjoy myself or anything, but it happened
What did you watch?
1024
« on: February 03, 2017, 12:28:48 PM »
jk das i love you
you're like a brother to me
1025
« on: February 03, 2017, 12:26:57 PM »
The toys attacking Sid at the end of Toy Story.
1026
« on: February 03, 2017, 12:23:51 PM »
Even you can't find anything good about them.
1027
« on: February 03, 2017, 10:48:05 AM »
I don't cum in peace.
1028
« on: February 03, 2017, 10:46:37 AM »
The sooner we invent advanced AI, the sooner we can put a robot voiced by Steve Blum into space for the sole purpose of watching anime.
1029
« on: February 03, 2017, 10:12:09 AM »
D-pads can go fuck themselves tbh, except for fighting games.
1030
« on: February 03, 2017, 10:04:03 AM »
1031
« on: February 03, 2017, 09:57:13 AM »
There's currently only one like, and I bet my left nut it's Class.
1032
« on: February 02, 2017, 11:43:43 PM »
Jeb is Loaf's alt.
Everyone is Loaf's alt.
1033
« on: February 02, 2017, 09:20:55 PM »
JebBush
more like
JebTheFuckingSavage
1034
« on: February 02, 2017, 07:36:51 PM »
Never make another thread
1035
« on: February 02, 2017, 06:33:06 PM »
This is kind of funny, though.
Dude it's hilarious. Bad Hombres.
America is becoming a meme.
Change your title to Bad Hombre.
1036
« on: February 02, 2017, 05:42:20 PM »
Now watch him totally not save the DCEU since I've said that.
1037
« on: February 02, 2017, 05:38:11 PM »
>Current Year + 2
>Still falling for the BvS is bad maymay
SHIGGITYDIGGITYDOODADAY
Justice League will come out and rock the box office, just you wait. All those RT shills will be crying bitch tears when DC is drowning in money like they have been with every release.
"WAAAAH IF WE KEEP SHITTING ON THEIR MOVIES, NO ONE WILL GO SEE THEM!!"
"AAAGGGHHHH HOW COME THEY'RE STILL MAKING MONEY?!?!" - Rotten Tomatoes
Jesus why are you so autistic
Just chill the fuck out
All of you chill the fuck out and trust in Johns. He'll sort this mess out.
Johns isn't that special. Scott Snyder would be my go-to.
I could say the same about Snyder, from what few of his stories I've read. Fixing shitty characters and stories is what Johns does best. He saved New 52, and I have faith he'll save the DCEU.
1038
« on: February 02, 2017, 05:27:11 PM »
My name is Barry Allen, and I am the fastest man alive. To the outside world, I'm an ordinary forensic scientist, but secretly, with the help of my friends at S.T.A.R. Labs, I fight crime and find other meta-humans like me. I hunted the man who killed my mother, but in doing so, I opened up our world to new threats. And I am the only one fast enough to stop them. I am... The Flash!
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1039
« on: February 02, 2017, 05:23:17 PM »
>Current Year + 2
>Still falling for the BvS is bad maymay
SHIGGITYDIGGITYDOODADAY
Justice League will come out and rock the box office, just you wait. All those RT shills will be crying bitch tears when DC is drowning in money like they have been with every release.
"WAAAAH IF WE KEEP SHITTING ON THEIR MOVIES, NO ONE WILL GO SEE THEM!!"
"AAAGGGHHHH HOW COME THEY'RE STILL MAKING MONEY?!?!" - Rotten Tomatoes
Jesus why are you so autistic
Just chill the fuck out
All of you chill the fuck out and trust in Johns. He'll sort this mess out.
1040
« on: February 02, 2017, 02:51:26 PM »
>Current Year + 2
>Still falling for the BvS is bad maymay
SHIGGITYDIGGITYDOODADAY
Justice League will come out and rock the box office, just you wait. All those RT shills will be crying bitch tears when DC is drowning in money like they have been with every release.
"WAAAAH IF WE KEEP SHITTING ON THEIR MOVIES, NO ONE WILL GO SEE THEM!!"
"AAAGGGHHHH HOW COME THEY'RE STILL MAKING MONEY?!?!" - Rotten Tomatoes
As if it won't make fuckloads regardless of quality.
1041
« on: February 02, 2017, 02:47:11 PM »
They're 0/3 so far, and I doubt WW or JL will make much of a difference.
They brought in Geoff Johns to help write Justice League, at least. Hopefully he can salvage whatever train wreck Snyder and Terrio were setting up.
1042
« on: February 02, 2017, 02:13:21 PM »
They'll never catch up to Marvel if they don't bring out the heavy hitters like Matter-Eater Lad or Gangbuster.
1043
« on: February 02, 2017, 11:09:01 AM »
keep rowlin' rowlin' rowlin' rowlin'
1044
« on: February 02, 2017, 11:05:53 AM »
Tea parties!
1045
« on: February 02, 2017, 07:07:30 AM »
The Wolf Among Us.
1046
« on: February 01, 2017, 08:47:11 PM »
Thank you for all the time you spent coding true mute, Cheat.
1047
« on: February 01, 2017, 08:43:50 PM »
1048
« on: February 01, 2017, 10:59:57 AM »
I liked Jojo better when it was called Diesel.
1049
« on: January 30, 2017, 09:53:16 PM »
I'd kill them.
1050
« on: January 30, 2017, 07:38:57 PM »
Bugs are stupid.
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