Reaility of Halo: Active Camouflage

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http://www.haloarchive.com/realityofhalo/2015/1/13/the-reality-of-halo-active-camouflage

I wrote some technobabble about how the Covenant's active camo and the UNSC's SPI armour could/ can work IRL. Enjoy.


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I'm reading it now ant it sounds pretty good. My only suggestion would be to put a caret in this.
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5.0x10-5 centimeters
So it looks like to this.
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5.0x10^-5

Edit: Also you should put WL in brackets next to wavelength so the reader knows what is means.

Last Edit: January 15, 2015, 06:01:52 AM by Rinev Jeqkogo


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I'm reading it now ant it sounds pretty good. My only suggestion would be to put a caret in this.
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5.0x10-5 centimeters
So it looks like to this.
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5.0x10^-5

Edit: Also you should put WL in brackets next to wavelength so the reader knows what is means.

I just remembered this- I don't have access to the blog itself, I just have to write stuff and get images ina  word doc, then PM it to one of the guys who has access. It's a bit of a farse, really. This one was submitted in mid-december .-.


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I just remembered this- I don't have access to the blog itself, I just have to write stuff and get images ina  word doc, then PM it to one of the guys who has access. It's a bit of a farse, really. This one was submitted in mid-december .-.
Wow, that's kind of stupid.


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I just remembered this- I don't have access to the blog itself, I just have to write stuff and get images ina  word doc, then PM it to one of the guys who has access. It's a bit of a farse, really. This one was submitted in mid-december .-.
Wow, that's kind of stupid.

Not really, I've not been a regular poster, I've only done 3 things. And there's a multitude of people who do have access, so I have a few people to message. It's just a bit of a ballache is all. I've noticed several typos already in my previous ones- one of which was adding an extra I to VASMIR.