Post your shit music lyrics ITT

Jester · February 27, 2016, 01:57:42 PM

Verb's thread got me thinking. A number suck ass at writing music, so why not dump them here? It's not like our opinion matters anyway.

Jester · February 27, 2016, 02:37:11 PM

Holy shit. I was digging around and I found the first song I ever wrote.

Jester · February 27, 2016, 02:42:51 PM

I wrote this awful masterpiece as a youngster. I never finished it because I looked at it halfway through and realized how bad it actually was.

Spoiler

World censored, people in dark. Blind shouts of victims ignored. I see fascists, I see blame, we love to play that deadly game I hate fascists, I'll set a flame, the whole fucking world will sing my name.

Beaten down we're strong, I've looked into the second sun, all I saw was myself. The bullet in a gun. Just one more push that's all it takes. Future generations are bound to repeat our mistakes.

My mind spins like a whirlpool, I burned the world you and I could've ruled. My heart turned black the second I looked back on what I had left.

Do you remember? Do you remember the day when my humanity began to fade? What about the song that played when you looked inside my head, only to realize that I was was already 10 years dead?

Fucking cunt come back to me. You whore, don't leave me. I'll wipe you the fuck out, somebody help me all I see is hell and doubt, merciful God give me some way out.

2000 miles away I think I hear you call out my name. I want to say I'm sorry. You gave me a new direction. I only wish you could have seen the hell I raised, entire nations started chanting my name. But you were there and I'm here.

You were the greatest thing dear to me, words can't sum up what your smile did to me. Words can't describe what your disappointment did to me. Word can't describe what your fucking hate did to me.

I forgive you and beg that you forgive me. I always knew you had to power to see the real me, and the real me is still alive somewhere taking shelter from the rising tide.

Jocephalopod · February 27, 2016, 03:01:07 PM

Word Wizard · February 27, 2016, 03:02:33 PM

I miss the old Sly Instinct, straight from the 'Go Sly Instinct
Chop up the soul Sly Instinct, set on his goals Sly Instinct
I hate the new Sly Instinct, the bad mood Sly Instinct
The always rude Sly Instinct, spaz in the news Sly Instinct
I miss the sweet Sly Instinct, chop up the beats Sly Instinct
I gotta to say, at that time I'd like to meet Sly Instinct
See I invented Sly Instinct, it wasn't any Sly Instincts
And now I look and look around and there's so many Sly Instincts
I used to love Sly Instinct, I used to love Sly Instinct
I even had the pink Polo, I thought I was Sly Instinct
What if Sly Instinct made a song, about Sly Instinct?
Called "I Miss The Old Sly Instinct," man that would be so Sly Instinct
That's all it was Sly Instinct, we still love Sly Instinct
And I love you like Sly Instinct loves Sly Instinct

DAS B00T x2 · February 27, 2016, 03:03:41 PM

Jester · February 27, 2016, 03:04:51 PM

Quote from: DAS B00T 2016 on February 27, 2016, 03:03:41 PM

No

Do it.

DAS B00T x2 · February 27, 2016, 03:06:18 PM

Quote from: Jester on February 27, 2016, 03:04:51 PM

Quote from: DAS B00T 2016 on February 27, 2016, 03:03:41 PM
No
Do it.

No.

And besides, my notebook is out in my car right now anyway.

Jester · February 27, 2016, 03:10:12 PM

Quote from: DAS B00T 2016 on February 27, 2016, 03:06:18 PM

Quote from: Jester on February 27, 2016, 03:04:51 PM

Quote from: DAS B00T 2016 on February 27, 2016, 03:03:41 PM
No
Do it.
No.

And besides, my notebook is out in my car right now anyway.

There are no judgements here, my friend.

DAS B00T x2 · February 27, 2016, 03:15:59 PM

Yes there are. I'm judging you right now.

Jester · February 27, 2016, 03:18:20 PM

Quote from: DAS B00T 2016 on February 27, 2016, 03:15:59 PM

Yes there are. I'm judging you right now.

Cmon, it can't be that bad.

N/A · February 27, 2016, 03:32:48 PM

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Jester · February 27, 2016, 03:39:19 PM

Quote from: Trump will create waifus on February 27, 2016, 03:32:48 PM

Eh, fuck it.
Spoiler
I came to this land again
This land that seemed once so fantastical in my early days
A land whose life was torn asunder and is now lain in decay
The dependence of its limiting resources have ran dry as I keep pushing forth
Taking more and more with passing day
It breathed and I consumed

This fantastical land of joy and wonder allowed for my frame of sight to see all so vividly
As the blinders placed on my eyes allowed for my periphery to no longer receive any more external pain
My own intrinsic values of internal rewards for accomplishments have waned
As I received all I had sought from this lands’ bountiful fruits

The price of all this, now I see
Is the myth of Sisyphus becoming mirrored as my truth
As this hedonistic treadmill has been set loose
With my mind needing further elixirs to release me from my own self indulged noose

And so it breathed and I consumed
Further and further to make up for my own gluttony
My own created truths
Fatally framed ideas about how long we can continue to make due

I see now that I have been the one to set the wheel in motion
As I reached for the sun and expected the rewards of warmth without expecting to feel the burn
Following in the footsteps in Icarus I let pride take priority of my mind
And I pushed past the limits of the happiness of man
Expecting for the grass to always remain greener on the other side

And so I came to this land again
Now barren and completely dry
My personal Elysium has been turned to stone
Eden cast aside by the fatal flaw of man

Discontent creates a need
A need to take more and more
Never sated in the mind
Not worried about the moment when the well runs dry

The price of all this, now I see
Is the myth of Sisyphus becoming mirrored as my truth
As this hedonistic treadmill has been set loose
With my mind needing further elixirs to release me from my own self indulged noose

I think one problem is the word choice you used

Elai · February 27, 2016, 03:43:57 PM

Lyrics don't matter nearly as much as the instrumentals behind them, IMO.

You ever look at lyrics online and not feel anything, but then listen to the song and just be like, "Wow..."? Yeah.

Coomer · February 27, 2016, 03:44:32 PM

Yo yo
My name is Joe
My pants are low
And my boxers show

Wha what

Luis · February 27, 2016, 05:42:46 PM

Just a small town girl

Jk this song is great

Luis · February 27, 2016, 05:46:04 PM

Quote from: Eliab on February 27, 2016, 03:43:57 PM

Lyrics don't matter nearly as much as the instrumentals behind them, IMO.

You ever look at lyrics online and not feel anything, but then listen to the song and just be like, "Wow..."? Yeah.

This
Unless theyre babbling on about the dumbest stuff

challengerX · February 27, 2016, 05:59:53 PM

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Dietrich Six · February 27, 2016, 06:58:37 PM

Get rekt!
Take a bottle of pills and eat shit!
Give yourself a shotgun enema and rid me of your presence.

Solonoid · February 27, 2016, 07:04:08 PM

Quote from: Eliab on February 27, 2016, 03:43:57 PM

Lyrics don't matter nearly as much as the instrumentals behind them, IMO.

You ever look at lyrics online and not feel anything, but then listen to the song and just be like, "Wow..."? Yeah.

This is literal proof that you have terrible taste in music.

DAS B00T x2 · February 27, 2016, 07:14:06 PM

Quote from: Eliab on February 27, 2016, 03:43:57 PM

Lyrics don't matter nearly as much as the instrumentals behind them, IMO.

You ever look at lyrics online and not feel anything, but then listen to the song and just be like, "Wow..."? Yeah.

It's hard to be taken seriously if your lyrics are cheesy as shit.

Elai · February 27, 2016, 08:43:06 PM

Quote from: DAS B00T 2016 on February 27, 2016, 07:14:06 PM

Quote from: Eliab on February 27, 2016, 03:43:57 PM
Lyrics don't matter nearly as much as the instrumentals behind them, IMO.

You ever look at lyrics online and not feel anything, but then listen to the song and just be like, "Wow..."? Yeah.
It's hard to be taken seriously if your lyrics are cheesy as shit.

Obviously.

I only said lyrics don't matter nearly as much as the instruments behind them.