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Refrain using the term "peasant" that many times, especially in the first sentence. Synonyms are your friends here

I am in agreement, but I had to use the term when referring to actual assemblies that were formed, and documents written. Thus, there is only one usage of the term in the intro that I can replace with a synonym.


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Bump 2: Electric Boogaloo.