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Quote from: Kitsunekun on May 12, 2015, 08:50:08 PMI wanna read!LINK IT NOW!Me and Paige met on the Internet in 2005 and decided to write a book. Sadly, we split up before we finished the second part. *prepare for cringe since I wasn't a very good writer at the time*SpoilerI felt completely different to how I feel around other men. He was thrilling. There was so many different things about it that made it even better to be around him! She was the most beautiful women I've ever seen. But I knew she would never accept me! I was a loser. Outcast. But at least I had a heart! Most men nowadays think women want diamonds and pretty things like that but for me it's different. I wanted love and passion,honesty and trust. I didn't know his name I just knew him as anonymous. Trying to find out who he was,was just exciting. I wanted him more! I knew her as Paige. Sadly she only knew me as anonymous. That's what everybody knew me as! One day I looked to giving my name when the time is right. But for now I'll just have to wait. I hate that word! I wanted to know him more. His name,his story,just anything. Everything about him I wanted. I never spoke to him, I thought he wouldn't want to speak to people like me. I saw him and walked past him repeating my steps. Just to get a glimpse off him. Before my mother passed she told me that if I met somebody I cared for I should tell instead of waiting. So that's what I did. The next time I saw her I would hope to god that my luck wouldn't run out! I went to the park where you would always see him. Just sitting there on the bench. I walked past and heard something, not knowing what it was I walked away. My smile faded. I wanted to speak to him I just couldn't find the words. He'd never want to speak to someone like me. I saw her pass me when I spoke. I didn't know if she couldn't her me or if she WANTED to ignore me. All I knew is that it hurt when it unfolded. So there I was in the rain, not feeling it out of either shock or pain. But in my heart I knew it wasn't over. It couldn't end now.., I had this urge to run. I don't know why I just ran. I ran everywhere I ran top to bottom. I ended the run at the park he was still sat there gazing. At first I thought I just had butterflies but the next thing I know is I collapse onto the floor. Breathing stops. Breathe goes. I saw Paige instantly collapse. The first thing I did was check if she was still breathing. Luckily she kept a steady breathing rate! My biggest concern was the fall she took on the pavement. An ambulance arrived and took her to Saint Mary's Hospital near the park. When I woke up it was blurry, I felt my head. It was wrapped in bandages. There was someone holding my hand,I couldn't see who it was but I knew,I knew it was him. My heart rate went up. I smiled. I swear he smiled back. I held his hand tighter. I was glad he was with me. I knew it wasn't over. The moment I saw that she was okay was the moment I was confident about sharing my name with somebody in the longest time I could remember. The blur went away. I could see. I saw him,I got butterflies,I smiled and said hello. I sat up,I just gazed into his eyes. I didn't know what to say to him. I was just stuck in the moment. I lent over and he went to catch me as I nearly fell I grabbed my chest. While everything seemed perfect it wasn't. I had to cherish her being in my arms for as long as I could. Because next week I'll have to march to my death in the Middle East. There was tears coming from his eyes as I ley in that hospital bed. "Paige"? He looked at me. "Anonymous"?We both laughed. We both felt the same, it wasn't awkward. I just hugged him. I loved him even though I knew nothing about him I loved him. "Just call me Jordan" I laughed. Finally something in my life felt right!
Quote from: Jesty on May 12, 2015, 09:15:03 PMQuote from: Kitsunekun on May 12, 2015, 08:50:08 PMI wanna read!LINK IT NOW!Me and Paige met on the Internet in 2005 and decided to write a book. Sadly, we split up before we finished the second part. *prepare for cringe since I wasn't a very good writer at the time*SpoilerI felt completely different to how I feel around other men. He was thrilling. There was so many different things about it that made it even better to be around him! She was the most beautiful women I've ever seen. But I knew she would never accept me! I was a loser. Outcast. But at least I had a heart! Most men nowadays think women want diamonds and pretty things like that but for me it's different. I wanted love and passion,honesty and trust. I didn't know his name I just knew him as anonymous. Trying to find out who he was,was just exciting. I wanted him more! I knew her as Paige. Sadly she only knew me as anonymous. That's what everybody knew me as! One day I looked to giving my name when the time is right. But for now I'll just have to wait. I hate that word! I wanted to know him more. His name,his story,just anything. Everything about him I wanted. I never spoke to him, I thought he wouldn't want to speak to people like me. I saw him and walked past him repeating my steps. Just to get a glimpse off him. Before my mother passed she told me that if I met somebody I cared for I should tell instead of waiting. So that's what I did. The next time I saw her I would hope to god that my luck wouldn't run out! I went to the park where you would always see him. Just sitting there on the bench. I walked past and heard something, not knowing what it was I walked away. My smile faded. I wanted to speak to him I just couldn't find the words. He'd never want to speak to someone like me. I saw her pass me when I spoke. I didn't know if she couldn't her me or if she WANTED to ignore me. All I knew is that it hurt when it unfolded. So there I was in the rain, not feeling it out of either shock or pain. But in my heart I knew it wasn't over. It couldn't end now.., I had this urge to run. I don't know why I just ran. I ran everywhere I ran top to bottom. I ended the run at the park he was still sat there gazing. At first I thought I just had butterflies but the next thing I know is I collapse onto the floor. Breathing stops. Breathe goes. I saw Paige instantly collapse. The first thing I did was check if she was still breathing. Luckily she kept a steady breathing rate! My biggest concern was the fall she took on the pavement. An ambulance arrived and took her to Saint Mary's Hospital near the park. When I woke up it was blurry, I felt my head. It was wrapped in bandages. There was someone holding my hand,I couldn't see who it was but I knew,I knew it was him. My heart rate went up. I smiled. I swear he smiled back. I held his hand tighter. I was glad he was with me. I knew it wasn't over. The moment I saw that she was okay was the moment I was confident about sharing my name with somebody in the longest time I could remember. The blur went away. I could see. I saw him,I got butterflies,I smiled and said hello. I sat up,I just gazed into his eyes. I didn't know what to say to him. I was just stuck in the moment. I lent over and he went to catch me as I nearly fell I grabbed my chest. While everything seemed perfect it wasn't. I had to cherish her being in my arms for as long as I could. Because next week I'll have to march to my death in the Middle East. There was tears coming from his eyes as I ley in that hospital bed. "Paige"? He looked at me. "Anonymous"?We both laughed. We both felt the same, it wasn't awkward. I just hugged him. I loved him even though I knew nothing about him I loved him. "Just call me Jordan" I laughed. Finally something in my life felt right! Still a better love story than 50 Shades of Grey.
So fuck you bitches.
Quote from: Jesty on May 12, 2015, 08:47:26 PM So fuck you bitches. I am NOT a female dog, you cumguzzler!
Quote from: Forgewolf on May 12, 2015, 09:28:00 PMQuote from: Jesty on May 12, 2015, 08:47:26 PM So fuck you bitches. I am NOT a female dog, you cumguzzler! bitch barrelJizzwizard Cumbucket
I changed a couple of words to not be seen as serious.. because I am not cereal at all
I have to contain my fangirling... But I loved it. The two voices were distinct and clear. I only saw one typo when you wrote "her me" instead of "hear me". I didn't pay attentions to punctuation tbh, but this story made my heart flutter thank you.
I have a confession to make (srsly)
