You don't though.

I'll give you props for writing your own though, unlike Fake Drake

Fair enough, although I still need to do some more lyrical exercises.

I'm in the studio all night I run this shit like bat man.
I eat up the competition, I feel like a fat man.
Oh this gluttony, words so smooth man they buttery.
I gotta rise to throne I can't be with this fuckery, Oh man.

OVO, TOPSZN, 6ix Squad, South Squad, YMB no cash like debit

Kanye West is a literal joke

Okay?

Put it on here and we will see how it sounds. Honestly we will give you a fair review, but you might as well expect harsh criticism. I would rather tell you what you lack than tell you that you are good.

Cause honestly there are two ways to make your career bloom.
A) With a whole lotta cash
B) With way above average talent and performance.

Honestly if you really want to make it big, do not only focus on your rhymes but also focus on how to make good beats. Trust me although you are relying on someone right now, you should get to learn that shit. Cause if you can learn how to produce a song and literally bring beats and rhythms from your head to the tape, you will likely have a better chance at making it big.

I will recommend though, try sampling, finding a bunch of songs and going through them to find some part that can click, like a beat or a rhythm and then try getting someone to re-edit those pieces together into a new song, and build your lyrics over them.

But that is me.

Quote from: McLemon on August 03, 2015, 11:38:14 PM

Kanye West is a literal joke

You're joking right.

He may be egotistical, but he is talented as fuck.

To get where he is, required some really good skills and there is no denying that.

I wasn't even talking about his talent, like, at all

Kanye is a literal joke even if he is talented.

Hell, I even used to listen to Kanye.
But like Nasty said, he's an awful person.

I've got ten macaronis, about eight dirty apes, nine mimes, ten hens; the shit never ends

You do realise awful =/= he's literally Hitler, you know.
He's a shitty person. There's obviously worse, but that doesn't make him better.

Talk about white knighting

Idgaf about spelling you should know this by now.

You still haven't provided any reasons for him being an awful person though smh. You should orobably log off

okay seriously what does OVO even mean

Isn't that some internet telephone service from like, five years ago?

I ain't a candy rapper, but I got some sweet bars
I took them from Kinder's lunch box, along with his toy cars
Now I get calls from my listeners saying I made them diabetic
I got no idea what to tell them though, I'm just some guy, not a medic
This shit is getting real pathetic
Like this Steve Urkel looking fool I seen rappin at a black march
Come to think of it, he seemed familar, oh it was just Lord Starch

Oh they can show love for sly's bars while I'm dropping platinum bars encrusted in diamond. That's okay, the hating makes me stronger. His bars was fire though.

But anyway OVO stands for Octobers very own. It's drakes label and synonymous with his squad.

Quote from: Jive Turkey on July 29, 2015, 04:13:45 PM

Name a rapper who doesn't act tough and is somewhat popular. I'll wait.

My boy Lecrae

YouTube

How the fuck did I know you'd come in here and post that guy?