Alternate Realities: New thread/CHAPTER ONE.

 
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You either die a hero or live long enough to become Mythic..
So since my other thread has just become me talking to myself. I'm gonna try one more time to see if you guys are interested enough to help me create this story.

Alternate Realities is a story about a man/boy named Gared Welding, showing his life in not one, but two different worlds. The real world of Earth and the Virtual land of Nomanis. Watching him develop into who he is. However it isn't that easy, as the line between the worlds become thin, to a point where the real reality becomes obscure. Revelations are found and choices made for young Gared as he splits his path between two Realties.

PROLOGUE/TEASER:
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CHAPTER ONE(new):
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SO tell me what you think! Criticize, compliment, suggest. Just tell me what you think!

Chapter 2 will be out soon, so come back here when it does! (And yes, special users will get an early view of the chapter.)
Last Edit: February 03, 2016, 05:30:36 PM by Pip


 
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You either die a hero or live long enough to become Mythic..
Oh well, I tried.


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I neither fear, nor despise.
Told you I'd read it : P

So far so good. Can't find anything to complain about, keep it up!


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I'm not going to read it.


 
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There are too many people muddying the literary world with their self-published-available-through-amazon rubbish. The fucking internet has convinced so many people that because they spend all day bashing out sentences on forums and the like that they are truly possessed of authoring talent. I mean, I respect the sentiment behind it. And every bit of writing that's written and read can reasonably be said to be making someone smarter. But the idiocracy of literature that's developed/developing is leading us to look at hacks like they are masterful writers, and I feel like 'internet authorship' is somewhat to blame. Why would you push yourself to take in better writing and stories when very few people will look down on you for reading Halo/Game of Thrones books and bad internet fan fiction exclusively. Who cares what you read when you're a person who watches the most intelligent ground-breaking television drama's and sitcoms!

There have always been trashy best-sellers and people to read them, but I feel like the internet has worsened it. This is the first time I've ever put these thoughts into words, and reading it back it seems a bit dumb and incomplete. But I could swear there's something to it.

And this isn't a criticism of you, Pip. I think you're just having some fun here.


 
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You either die a hero or live long enough to become Mythic..
There are too many people muddying the literary world with their self-published-available-through-amazon rubbish. The fucking internet has convinced so many people that because they spend all day bashing out sentences on forums and the like that they are truly possessed of authoring talent. I mean, I respect the sentiment behind it. And every bit of writing that's written and read can reasonably be said to be making someone smarter. But the idiocracy of literature that's developed/developing is leading us to look at hacks like they are masterful writers, and I feel like 'internet authorship' is somewhat to blame. Why would you push yourself to take in better writing and stories when very few people will look down on you for reading Halo/Game of Thrones books and bad internet fan fiction exclusively. Who cares what you read when you're a person who watches the most intelligent ground-breaking television drama's and sitcoms!

There have always been trashy best-sellers and people to read them, but I feel like the internet has worsened it. This is the first time I've ever put these thoughts into words, and reading it back it seems a bit dumb and incomplete. But I could swear there's something to it.

And this isn't a criticism of you, Pip. I think you're just having some fun here.

I wouldn't say I follow your train of thought. I kinda get it but not so much.

And I just like creating things, whether it be a website with coding or a world(or two) with writing. It's enjoyable to see what people think of these worlds(unless they hate them). Which is why I was posting it here.


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You're not using that word right.