Read my fucking immigration paper you fucks

More Than Mortal · August 25, 2014, 03:46:40 PM

It's here, 2.5 pages long.

Looking for comments on the style, readability, whether I've sourced enough, et cetera. Don't feel like you need to read all of it if you don't want to, just enough for you to get a general feel of it.

Reciffo_Smmoc · August 25, 2014, 03:49:07 PM

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Juuzou · August 25, 2014, 03:52:56 PM

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Korra · August 25, 2014, 03:58:49 PM

More Than Mortal · August 25, 2014, 04:04:41 PM

Quote from: Nuka on August 25, 2014, 04:00:50 PM

33 pages? Good lord.

w0t

Magos Domina · August 25, 2014, 04:06:19 PM

Quote from: Meta Cognition on August 25, 2014, 03:46:40 PM

Just finishing off a nearly-three-page essay on the impacts of immigration and how to deal with it. If I post this in a Google doc, will you guys read it?

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Just finishing off a nearly-three-page essay on the impacts of immigration and how to deal with it

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a nearly-three-page essay

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three-page

Spoiler

No

Mr. Psychologist · August 25, 2014, 04:11:01 PM

I'll read it while I drink my tea <.<

More Than Mortal · August 25, 2014, 04:14:19 PM

Quote from: Mr Psychologist on August 25, 2014, 04:11:01 PM

I'll read it while I drink my tea <.<

mein neger

Mr. Psychologist · August 25, 2014, 04:29:36 PM

It's a great essay <.<

I'm not the one to look for grammatical shite because I hate that stuff but content wise it's well structured and well cited >.> However, it could just be because I have to do this crap relentlessly but do you need a list of references? Or is that not necessary/not included? >.>

More Than Mortal · August 25, 2014, 04:30:27 PM

Quote from: Mr Psychologist on August 25, 2014, 04:29:36 PM

It's a great essay <.<

I'm not the one to look for grammatical shite because I hate that stuff but content wise it's well structured and well cited >.> However, it could just be because I have to do this crap relentlessly but do you need a list of references? Or is that not necessary/not included? >.>

I have a bibliography, I just didn't upload it with the google doc.

challengerX · August 25, 2014, 04:41:16 PM

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Kinder Graham · August 25, 2014, 05:00:11 PM

>not MLA style

My eyes, they hurt. This is what MLA looks like since you're brit

cxfhvxgkcf-56:7 · August 25, 2014, 05:02:03 PM

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DAS B00T x2 · August 25, 2014, 05:11:44 PM

Quote from: Kinder_ on August 25, 2014, 05:00:11 PM

>not MLA style

FUCK MLA

Kinder Graham · August 25, 2014, 05:12:40 PM

Quote from: DAS B00T x2 on August 25, 2014, 05:11:44 PM

FUCK MLA

NO, FUCK YOU

DAS B00T x2 · August 25, 2014, 05:19:33 PM

Quote from: Kinder_ on August 25, 2014, 05:12:40 PM

NO, FUCK YOU

Spoiler

I win.

Flee · August 25, 2014, 06:07:50 PM

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Flee · August 25, 2014, 06:09:23 PM

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Juuzou · August 25, 2014, 06:41:09 PM

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Mr. Psychologist · August 25, 2014, 06:48:55 PM

Quote from: Lady Noelle on August 25, 2014, 06:41:09 PM

Why the fuck is it all squished together?

It looks normal to me, I think it might just be a UK/US thing here <.<
Are your essays normally all spaced out?

Juuzou · August 25, 2014, 06:50:50 PM

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DAS B00T x2 · August 25, 2014, 06:51:20 PM

Quote from: Mr Psychologist on August 25, 2014, 06:48:55 PM

It looks normal to me, I think it might just be a UK/US thing here <.<
Are your essays normally all spaced out?

Overspaced, I'd say. There's so much fucking blank space in MLA formatting that it's rediculous.

Mr. Psychologist · August 25, 2014, 06:56:44 PM

Quote from: Lady Noelle on August 25, 2014, 06:50:50 PM

Yes, so that you can actually read them. Put a space between every paragraph.

Ah yes, I didn't notice that. I would put spaces in paragraphs but I loathe spacing it MLA style. It's such a wasteful way of printing and it's slow to extract information from <.<

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Flee · August 25, 2014, 11:14:08 PM

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R o c k e t · August 25, 2014, 11:48:00 PM

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Read my fucking immigration paper you fucks

You are going to fail.

Nascent Email · August 26, 2014, 03:00:07 PM

I liked it. Could have used more sauce though.