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3571
« on: January 06, 2015, 06:35:44 PM »
What do you mourn?
I take away the infected from West Ardougne
Am I detecting metaphor to all of this?
We don't really have a king Thoros to set things straight, if that's what you're getting at.
3572
« on: January 06, 2015, 06:27:57 PM »
What do you mourn?
3573
« on: January 06, 2015, 06:26:00 PM »
That guys mouth is weird
your mouth is going to look weird when im done with it you little
im calling mom
 I don't believe you, Suzuya.
3574
« on: January 06, 2015, 06:20:44 PM »
The end of Avatar: The Last Airbender
Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle
Halo 3
Invisible Man
3575
« on: January 06, 2015, 06:15:15 PM »
I keep imagining a heroine den spiced up with a bit of non-consensual touching here.
...
I think I should leave.
3576
« on: January 06, 2015, 06:11:14 PM »
Why is this in Serious?
Dunno. Why shouldn't it be?
3577
« on: January 06, 2015, 05:15:43 AM »
But think of all the 1337mlg noscopes these kids would get
Our military would be unstoppable
But imagine the war crimes...
3578
« on: January 06, 2015, 05:14:30 AM »
I'm sure I can think something up if you guys want something different than medals from Halo.
I'm still waiting for my custom title
You gotta be Mythic++.
I tried to input my custom title and it didn't work 
Mythic++ means Mythic + 1, or the rank above Mythic.
Apparently that was lost in translation...
Not lost, but it's unclear... you're going to add it it to the rank info page?
Fuck no, it's a secret.
But I'll know when I get there?
Absolutely, without a doubt.
inb4CumGuzzlingSemonDemon
3579
« on: January 06, 2015, 05:12:40 AM »
For the time being mine are exclusively Homestuck related.
3580
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:54:55 AM »
Thereafter, silence
dripped between skittering footsteps
A little basic?
What does this mean?
This was for someone else. Now it's for me.
dripped
drips
...
I don't know. Now it's for you, you're the only one that can change it.
Considering this is happening in past tense it wouldn't make as much sense grammatically and it wouldn't serve to enhance the meaning. Is this suggestion on the basis of it sounding prettier?
yes, I was going by sound.
Oh, alright. I'm trying to set a creepy, unsettling tone in the section we're talking about. What would you suggest for wording?
Creeps
Folds
Rises
It's only me being stupid and repeating it when I said it out loud. I'm weird. But that's all I can think of.
Creeps is totes awesome. Keeping it.
3581
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:53:06 AM »
Since when is Tru the resident poet? I'm the resident poet.
That being said, I'm not the sort to critique others poems easily. This is what it is. It reads like any aspiring poetry. Not the best, not the worst. What is it for?
It was for someone else. Now it's for me.
Do you know what I'm getting at in this short section? Do you see how I'm trying to do it?
Anyone who posts poetry here and frequents this place could qualify as a "resident poet," don't you think?
Well, sure, I guess... except that I'm a published poet.
I must admit that I don't understand exactly what the theme of it is yet. It lacks a clear narrative. I'll say that much.
If you want I wouldn't mind sending you the current thing I have written (even if it's only 2/5 of the total work) for revision. I mean, I've sent you my work before...
3582
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:45:07 AM »
Thereafter, silence
dripped between skittering footsteps
A little basic?
What does this mean?
This was for someone else. Now it's for me.
dripped
drips
...
I don't know. Now it's for you, you're the only one that can change it.
Considering this is happening in past tense it wouldn't make as much sense grammatically and it wouldn't serve to enhance the meaning. Is this suggestion on the basis of it sounding prettier?
yes, I was going by sound.
Oh, alright. I'm trying to set a creepy, unsettling tone in the section we're talking about. What would you suggest for wording?
3583
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:38:54 AM »
Since when is Tru the resident poet? I'm the resident poet.
That being said, I'm not the sort to critique others poems easily. This is what it is. It reads like any aspiring poetry. Not the best, not the worst. What is it for?
It was for someone else. Now it's for me.
Do you know what I'm getting at in this short section? Do you see how I'm trying to do it?
Anyone who posts poetry here and frequents this place could qualify as a "resident poet," don't you think?
Well, sure, I guess... except that I'm a published poet.
I must admit that I don't understand exactly what the theme of it is yet. It lacks a clear narrative. I'll say that much.
Probably because it's part of it (as I stated in the OP).
3584
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:27:41 AM »
Thereafter, silence
dripped between skittering footsteps
A little basic?
What does this mean?
This was for someone else. Now it's for me.
dripped
drips
...
I don't know. Now it's for you, you're the only one that can change it.
Considering this is happening in past tense it wouldn't make as much sense grammatically and it wouldn't serve to enhance the meaning. Is this suggestion on the basis of it sounding prettier?
3585
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:19:50 AM »
Thereafter, silence
dripped between skittering footsteps
A little basic?
What does this mean?
This was for someone else. Now it's for me.
3586
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:15:01 AM »
Since when is Tru the resident poet? I'm the resident poet.
That being said, I'm not the sort to critique others poems easily. This is what it is. It reads like any aspiring poetry. Not the best, not the worst. What is it for?
It was for someone else. Now it's for me.
Do you know what I'm getting at in this short section? Do you see how I'm trying to do it?
Anyone who posts poetry here and frequents this place could qualify as a "resident poet," don't you think?
3587
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:09:56 AM »
It's that weird time before the next wave of people log in, isn't it?
It used to be the plan was: screwing the man. Now its have sex with a man.Spoiler (After he buys you ".com" for sale at a low, low price)
As long as I get my Shekels when all is said and done I will have lived a happy merchant's life.
3588
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:04:31 AM »
Too late.
Psyki fanfic is already underway.
Fixed.
3589
« on: January 06, 2015, 04:01:25 AM »
I'd love to have a read, but I can't devote too much time to reading right now.
In class >.>
In class and posting like a champ.
Where the hell are my Estus flasks?
You need to light a bonfire on your desk.
I don't think there's a desk in my house, which is somewhat weird when I think of it.
I could make do with my bed, but I'm not accustomed to sleeping in Ash. It's probably finer than sand, but still manages to get in every crack imaginable.
3590
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:59:09 AM »
It's that weird time before the next wave of people log in, isn't it?
3591
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:56:36 AM »
I'd love to have a read, but I can't devote too much time to reading right now.
In class >.>
In class and posting like a champ.
Where the hell are my Estus flasks?
3592
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:54:51 AM »
No one's ready for Naru. No one.
3593
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:53:48 AM »
What is up with these threads
Seriously, I'm wondering when the Taurus demon's gonna show up.
3594
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:50:39 AM »
Spoiler Between athwart stones I sat transfixed
on the glinting scene, pinpoints of peace
in a liar's sunless land
Then it arose from empty shallows,
splashes over dead stones.
A chill caressed my skin.
Thereafter, silence
dripped between skittering footsteps
I fled echoes reflecting
an approaching reverberation,
crystals littering stones
like jutting bones
apprehending with dead-end cessation,
retreating rain above
and encroaching silence below
Awaiting doom on dissenting haunches,
clasping ears with cornered hands
I stared wide eyed
into my shrieking reflection
By my hands they did not stop
but in my skull resounded
baring through my barriers with clamorous axes
and peering through me with shrill grins
on wicked faces
Clear as a night's stillness
I saw it bathed in brightness
ivory hands holding a face
limned in alabaster tresses
and streaking scarlet droplets
over pearly cheeks
I sat with a chest of burning anticipation
the other gasping
with a knife-chested handle
renting the silence
3595
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:39:32 AM »
I don't think there's anyone....
I bet you wouldn't say that if Shinobu was here.
Wait, isn't she one of your alts? You'd be like... Making out with yourself. In theory.
lol yeah
Shinobo on bnet was me.
Spoiler Oss has dibs on her though.
Neko is for me.
The Otaku's wet dream. I was also a Shinobu fan, but if I watched it again I could lean more towards Senjougahara. Esdeath taught me many things about my shipping priorities. As did Homestuck.
I like Gahara, but as a onlooker, with binoculars.
Huh. Reminds me of him There's just something I like about sadistic women, and sometimes I worry.
3596
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:33:11 AM »
Also, I dreamt that Longface wrote an autobiography and the first 2 pages were instructions on how to assassinate Franz Ferdinand.
I could see him starting a world war with shenanigans.
3597
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:30:25 AM »
I don't think there's anyone....
I bet you wouldn't say that if Shinobu was here.
Wait, isn't she one of your alts? You'd be like... Making out with yourself. In theory.
lol yeah
Shinobo on bnet was me.
Spoiler Oss has dibs on her though.
Neko is for me.
The Otaku's wet dream. I was also a Shinobu fan, but if I watched it again I could lean more towards Senjougahara. Esdeath taught me many things about my shipping priorities. As did Homestuck.
3598
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:26:51 AM »
This stuff again >.>
You don't like it? Feel free to post whatever toothbrush porn you desire.
What about kinky shower scenes >.>
Fanfic Kaiki into it and you can have whatever the hell you want.
But seriously, that was definitely infidelity. And I'm not saying Araragi isn't promiscuous, because he's more amorous than a harem protagonist at a beach party. That moment in the anime just isn't observed as a moment of infidelity and it's weird.
Psy would not be happy about that >.>
It was weird, looking in on it...
But considering we've already had the toothbrush scene amoung other oddities. (pun?)
So I didn't find the shower scene as jarring as I probably should've, in the context of the show.
Yeah, at that point in the show there was definitely a lull in story. Then from there it ramped up and didn't stop until Kaiki became my favorite character of the series. It was like seeing the pearly gates and being dropped back to earth because some neighbor saved me from auto-erotic asphyxiation.
On second thought, you could put Psy in that fanfic too, just him and Kaiki in a shower. Let's make it canon.
3599
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:18:34 AM »
 Damn right.
3600
« on: January 06, 2015, 03:17:03 AM »
I don't think there's anyone....
I bet you wouldn't say that if Shinobu was here.
Wait, isn't she one of your alts? You'd be like... Making out with yourself. In theory.
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