Big Boss's Pokemon Nuzlocke Comic: Part 27: The Battle with Wattson (Conclusion)

Big Boss · July 22, 2016, 10:01:42 PM

And hopefully I'll improve my style as it goes on. I think it's already on the right track but I've never attempted something like this before. What I might do is occasionally a whole page in colour, if it's a big appropriate moment.

Big Boss · July 23, 2016, 09:18:20 AM

Part 5 added

Tyger · July 23, 2016, 09:25:44 AM

Quote from: Big Boss on July 23, 2016, 09:18:20 AM

Part 5 added

might want to remove part 3 from the title

Big Boss · July 23, 2016, 09:29:08 AM

Quote from: Tyger on July 23, 2016, 09:25:44 AM

Quote from: Big Boss on July 23, 2016, 09:18:20 AM
Part 5 added
might want to remove part 3 from the title

oops

thanks for the heads up

Big Boss · July 23, 2016, 03:28:41 PM

Part 6 added

Big Boss · July 23, 2016, 03:53:54 PM

any feedback

Tyger · July 23, 2016, 05:25:27 PM

I like the part with the Pokemon

Big Boss · July 23, 2016, 06:04:53 PM

same tbh

I won't go overboard with it but I'm going to throw in references to other things I like every once in a while when it's appropriate

Like if one of my best team members dies I'll do a panel of me wearing a beret saluting its grave

Big Boss · July 24, 2016, 06:32:17 AM

Quote from: Big Boss on July 22, 2016, 02:07:51 PM

Quote from: Verbatim on July 22, 2016, 02:02:45 PM
Quote from: Big Boss on July 22, 2016, 01:58:20 PM
I forgot to heal after the May fight and my Torchic is at low health

Some dude just challenged me

FUCCCCCC
Good luck

it's moments like this that produce the best material

Well I didn't die but I think I have an angel on my shoulder because something incredible happened

It is in part 7

Big Boss · July 24, 2016, 08:53:18 AM

Just realized I accidentally wrote part 8 on it

Big Boss · July 25, 2016, 11:56:27 AM

Part 8 added

Verbatim · July 25, 2016, 12:02:41 PM

RIP Wade

Protip: When it comes to training shrimpy 'mons, I'd recommend switch training them until they learn at least another move.

I don't wanna influence you too much, but yeah, that'll save you a lot of avoidable deaths.

Also, maybe I'm just blind, but your dialogue can be a little difficult to read in certain panels. The letters kinda squish together, and I have to take a moment to figure out what it says. Maybe increase the panel size to give you more room?

Big Boss · July 25, 2016, 12:10:42 PM

Quote from: Verbatim on July 25, 2016, 12:02:41 PM

RIP Wade

Protip: When it comes to training shrimpy 'mons, I'd recommend switch training them until they learn at least another move.

I don't wanna influence you too much, but yeah, that'll save you a lot of avoidable deaths.

Also, maybe I'm just blind, but your dialogue can be a little difficult to read in certain panels. The letters kinda squish together, and I have to take a moment to figure out what it says. Maybe increase the panel size to give you more room?

I do try with the text but my tablet is being kind of unresponsive. I'm thinking about possibly switching to the text tool instead so it's a bit clearer.

Might just restart the program and see if it speeds up a bit.

And yeah I'm grinding a bit so I don't just immediately faint as soon as I begin. Wade dying was really unexpected though...

Verbatim · July 25, 2016, 12:14:48 PM

Also, format-wise, I recommend that you name each spoiler tag, like so:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

you don't have to, but i think it looks a lot cleaner

Big Boss · July 25, 2016, 12:26:38 PM

Quote from: Verbatim on July 25, 2016, 12:14:48 PM

Also, format-wise, I recommend that you name each spoiler tag, like so:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8

you don't have to, but i think it looks a lot cleaner

Fuck I never actually knew how to do a named spoiler

thank you

A salt rifle · July 25, 2016, 02:35:43 PM

Quote from: ねこ on July 22, 2016, 07:12:38 PM

Spoiler
Spoiler

I tried drawing a pokemon trainer, I think It came out alright

Pretty alright. You've got a good grasp on proportions and relative scale especially.

Tyger · July 25, 2016, 03:01:00 PM

Training? Why even nuzlock if you're not gunna yolo suicide mission it

Hahahaha very funny Zonda · July 25, 2016, 03:24:00 PM

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Big Boss · July 25, 2016, 03:30:18 PM

part 9 is active

Big Boss · July 25, 2016, 03:31:41 PM

Quote from: Tyger on July 25, 2016, 03:01:00 PM

Training? Why even nuzlock if you're not gunna yolo suicide mission it

I don't want to immediately die

If I catch a level 4 at the end of a route right before the next down it'll be a bit pointless, I at least want to be a similar level to the next area

Spartan · July 25, 2016, 04:01:38 PM

What ability does Marill have?

Big Boss · July 26, 2016, 06:09:15 AM

Part 10 added

Big Boss · July 26, 2016, 06:09:53 AM

Quote from: SpartanT on July 25, 2016, 04:01:38 PM

What ability does Marill have?

I don't think I ever actually checked, I'll have a look in a bit

Big Boss · July 26, 2016, 11:28:34 AM

Part 11 added

Big Boss · July 26, 2016, 02:50:43 PM

Quote from: SpartanT on July 25, 2016, 04:01:38 PM

What ability does Marill have?

Thick Fat

Big Boss · July 26, 2016, 05:11:11 PM

So any feedback so far

Tyger · July 26, 2016, 05:41:40 PM

Quote from: Big Boss on July 26, 2016, 05:11:11 PM

So any feedback so far

the corny humor is great and really reminiscent of the original nuzlock

Keep it up

Big Boss · July 26, 2016, 05:42:35 PM

Quote from: Tyger on July 26, 2016, 05:41:40 PM

Quote from: Big Boss on July 26, 2016, 05:11:11 PM
So any feedback so far
the corny humor is great and really reminiscent of the original nuzlock

Keep it up

gr8

any suggestions on how to improve?

Other than neater text

Tyger · July 26, 2016, 05:45:55 PM

The text is the only thing. If you can't or don't want to write neater just space the letters more and write a bit bigger

Big Boss · July 26, 2016, 05:54:30 PM

I'll work on that