So, I decided to revive and rewrite my books

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Oh, hey.
I may have made a thread a few months ago about how I was considering it, but wasn't sure. But, I've decided to go through with it.

As a result, much like I did initially, I'll be taking people from the forum and putting them into the books as characters. This time around, you'll be put into the first one, not the second.

If your interested shoot me a pm.

I decided to rewrite them because well, I wrote them around 4 years ago and although they are actually pretty well written, they weren't as dark as I wanted them to be. Now that I'm older and have read and seen darker themes, I can add more and take it to the level I wanted.

If anyone is actually interested in finding out what it's about, ask and I'll add it to the OP. Other then that, would anyone be interested in having a role?


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What's it about?


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What's it about?

Essentially, it's a story about a father telling his son of a civil war that occurred in the US. The father was on the losing side, and they got absolutely massacred. As a result, the U.S. no longer had a democratic system, and fell into the same fold that pre World War II Germany fell into. One powerful leader who propels the nation into an era of growth and success. But it doesn't last long. As a result, a civil war breaks out between the new regime and those who were trying to retain what the US was originally about. The father tells the story hoping he could convince the son to try and rekindle another civil war. All remaining survivors of the initial civil war are doing the same. Spreading word of what actually happened. But the son wasn't alive to experience how things were before, he was born into how things were with the new regime, and saw nothing wrong with it.

The first book is the father going back and telling his son the events of the first civil war. It's the most informative and sets the plot and setting in motion. It's fairly dark, but as a result of the way the father tells the story, it's not as dark as it actually was. You hear/ read what you he wants you to know. You read from the sons perspective. And see how he reacts and refuses what his father is telling him.

The second book is what happens after, and is the darkest book. It portrays the sons psychological deterioration, and is written in the most depressing way possible. Because it's the sons journal. What he feels and what he sees is written down. Your reading his account as it happens.

The third book continues the story and ends it. This book actually requires a co-write for plot reasons. And the person has to be European.

It's meant to be similar to how WW2 Germany was under the nazi regime. Those fighting the true Americans, are forced to do it. Not everyone wants to fight. And that's made evident.

Sorry if my grammar is terrible, writing from a phone is kinda difficult


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just make sure cheat is the evil, greedy jew that's the antagonist of the story


 
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Hmm...
just make sure cheat is the evil, greedy jew that's the antagonist of the story
I was going to request this, actually. ;)


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I cant argue with progress, just you.
I like premise of the story.  Did you write all three books and redoing them or just the first 2 from needing a co-write.


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What's it about?

Essentially, it's a story about a father telling his son of a civil war that occurred in the US. The father was on the losing side, and they got absolutely massacred. As a result, the U.S. no longer had a democratic system, and fell into the same fold that pre World War II Germany fell into. One powerful leader who propels the nation into an era of growth and success. But it doesn't last long. As a result, a civil war breaks out between the new regime and those who were trying to retain what the US was originally about. The father tells the story hoping he could convince the son to try and rekindle another civil war. All remaining survivors of the initial civil war are doing the same. Spreading word of what actually happened. But the son wasn't alive to experience how things were before, he was born into how things were with the new regime, and saw nothing wrong with it.

The first book is the father going back and telling his son the events of the first civil war. It's the most informative and sets the plot and setting in motion. It's fairly dark, but as a result of the way the father tells the story, it's not as dark as it actually was. You hear/ read what you he wants you to know. You read from the sons perspective. And see how he reacts and refuses what his father is telling him.

The second book is what happens after, and is the darkest book. It portrays the sons psychological deterioration, and is written in the most depressing way possible. Because it's the sons journal. What he feels and what he sees is written down. Your reading his account as it happens.

The third book continues the story and ends it. This book actually requires a co-write for plot reasons. And the person has to be European.

It's meant to be similar to how WW2 Germany was under the nazi regime. Those fighting the true Americans, are forced to do it. Not everyone wants to fight. And that's made evident.

Sorry if my grammar is terrible, writing from a phone is kinda difficult

That's retarded.


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Ember used to be cool and funny

Now he's just gay
it's about damn time, you said you were making me a character in the story three years ago


 
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it's about damn time, you said you were making me a character in the story three years ago

Everyone that requested to be in it were in it, so you were in it.