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I've sort of hit a crossroads with my universe. Not with the stuff regarding the immediate history, but the backstory of everything else. Put simply, I've been displeased with how a lot of stuff has turned out and the direction I went in went down a route I do not like- option 1. Option 2 is one that I have been thinking that can fit with what I have established without too much retconning.

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Option 1 is the current setting; a species of essentially gods created all life as an experiment, before one species rebelled and managed to create a safe area in the Milky Way. Several species were created to evolve behind the S'pher lines and ultimately fight back. One species was humanity. This goes against some things I have in mind; primarily the 'long lost species' trope and 'humanity is special' trope, for reasons I'm sure do not need explaining.

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Option 2 is different. The S'pher still invade Earth in 2654 but for different reason; they long ago declared themselves as justice bringers and dedicated to removing injustice from the universe. Humans were largely oppressive towards other species and are seen as offenders to this reasoning and must be eliminated. The various anomaly that occupy space are in fact cracks in space caused by the S'pher weaponry used in destroying planets and star systems. The Sh'Kaali are a species occupying another dimension entirely, with the risk of being allowed through the cracks if the boundaries become too weak. This ultimately keeps all the major events the same, as well as the reasoning for misplaced stars (My galaxy does not align to real star maps) and even the two endings I pondered before can be kept with minimal change. The fact that humans evolved in one of these dimensional tears is pure coincidence. I prefer this as it adds that element of randomness into the lore while keeping an overarching threat, the major events and so forth in place as well as allowing new possibilities of alternate dimensions and time travel (Though I would not do the latter as a lazy excuse, but fully plan out a motive for a potential paradox scenario) and is overall more interesting to me, as well as leaves the questions of how large the S'pher empire is and so forth while not having long lost species with ancient relics.


What do you think?
Last Edit: November 23, 2014, 05:29:14 PM by BaconShelf


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Option 2 sound more interesting then Option 1


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I don't know what the fuck youre saying but I know its bullshit.


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I don't know what the fuck youre saying but I know its bullshit.


Do you give a fu- oh wait, you don't.


 
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The S'pher still invade Earth in 2654 but for different reason; they long ago declared themselves as justice bringers and dedicated to removing injustice from the universe. Humans were largely oppressive towards other species and are seen as offenders to this reasoning and must be eliminated.
Meh... seems like something a moralfag would write.


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The S'pher still invade Earth in 2654 but for different reason; they long ago declared themselves as justice bringers and dedicated to removing injustice from the universe. Humans were largely oppressive towards other species and are seen as offenders to this reasoning and must be eliminated.
Meh... seems like something a moralfag would write.

No, I just want reasoning better than all teh revenge and 'I'm too lazy to explain so let's just say its mysterious and ooh mystery!'

Plus I need something that isn't going to require a rewrite of 100+ documents.


 
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The S'pher still invade Earth in 2654 but for different reason; they long ago declared themselves as justice bringers and dedicated to removing injustice from the universe. Humans were largely oppressive towards other species and are seen as offenders to this reasoning and must be eliminated.
Meh... seems like something a moralfag would write.

No, I just want reasoning better than all teh revenge and 'I'm too lazy to explain so let's just say its mysterious and ooh mystery!'

Plus I need something that isn't going to require a rewrite of 100+ documents.
Okay, it just put off that kinda... (thought I hate the term) really edgy sort of "humanity is inherently evil" line of thinking at first.


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sounds messy

seems like option two is the wey 2 go


 
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Aye. I'd side with option two.

Although, you have to be careful when considering the "All Huumans r bad" trope as well. You can't win no matter what direction you take to be honest.

But your second option seems more interesting and creative. The S'pher represent an absolute. No compromise in justice or punishment. Humanity sits in a middle ground. They can be good, they can be bad. And the Sh'kaali represent chaos. But they aren't neccessirly bad.

Think about universes. Every universe, in theory, has the potential for a different set of laws. So, if one universe were to "bleed" into another, the results would be varied, potentially being benificial, or chatastrophic. If you ever read Asimov's "The God's Themselves," this will bring up the point I'm trying to make a little better.

In this scenario, I don't necessarily see the Sh'kaali as being bad, but because their universe operates on a different set of physics and laws than ours, their contact with our own universal mesh is devastating, and thus they are seen as a threat. Chaos.



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The S'pher still invade Earth in 2654 but for different reason; they long ago declared themselves as justice bringers and dedicated to removing injustice from the universe. Humans were largely oppressive towards other species and are seen as offenders to this reasoning and must be eliminated.
Meh... seems like something a moralfag would write.

No, I just want reasoning better than all teh revenge and 'I'm too lazy to explain so let's just say its mysterious and ooh mystery!'

Plus I need something that isn't going to require a rewrite of 100+ documents.
Okay, it just put off that kinda... (thought I hate the term) really edgy sort of "humanity is inherently evil" line of thinking at first.

Nah. It makes more sense with context, which is my bad. Essentially, humans had bad experiences in first contact and most still harbour xenophobic opinions. When they gained power over everything due to a mixture of political blackmail and military buildup, they were quick to install pro-human policies. So kinda like if Cerberus gained full control I guess.


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Aye. I'd side with option two.

Although, you have to be careful when considering the "All Huumans r bad" trope as well. You can't win no matter what direction you take to be honest.

But your second option seems more interesting and creative. The S'pher represent an absolute. No compromise in justice or punishment. Humanity sits in a middle ground. They can be good, they can be bad. And the Sh'kaali represent chaos. But they aren't neccessirly bad.

Think about universes. Every universe, in theory, has the potential for a different set of laws. So, if one universe were to "bleed" into another, the results would be varied, potentially being benificial, or chatastrophic. If you ever read Asimov's "The God's Themselves," this will bring up the point I'm trying to make a little better.

In this scenario, I don't necessarily see the Sh'kaali as being bad, but because their universe operates on a different set of physics and laws than ours, their contact with our own universal mesh is devastating, and thus they are seen as a threat. Chaos.


I don't see many universes with the 'humans are inherently evil' reasoning. Plus, they aren't without reasoning in their actions; first contact with aliens was not peaceful and left many hateful, scared and generally pretty shitty towards other species. When they gained control due to having a good economy and general underhanded work, they were quick to install a pro-human regime. Of course, there's a militia pro-alien faction that also consists of a lot of humans, but the S'pher are indiscriminate, all or nothing as far as they care.


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Aye. I'd side with option two.

Although, you have to be careful when considering the "All Huumans r bad" trope as well. You can't win no matter what direction you take to be honest.

But your second option seems more interesting and creative. The S'pher represent an absolute. No compromise in justice or punishment. Humanity sits in a middle ground. They can be good, they can be bad. And the Sh'kaali represent chaos. But they aren't neccessirly bad.

Think about universes. Every universe, in theory, has the potential for a different set of laws. So, if one universe were to "bleed" into another, the results would be varied, potentially being benificial, or chatastrophic. If you ever read Asimov's "The God's Themselves," this will bring up the point I'm trying to make a little better.

In this scenario, I don't necessarily see the Sh'kaali as being bad, but because their universe operates on a different set of physics and laws than ours, their contact with our own universal mesh is devastating, and thus they are seen as a threat. Chaos.


I don't see many universes with the 'humans are inherently evil' reasoning. Plus, they aren't without reasoning in their actions; first contact with aliens was not peaceful and left many hateful, scared and generally pretty shitty towards other species. When they gained control due to having a good economy and general underhanded work, they were quick to install a pro-human regime. Of course, there's a militia pro-alien faction that also consists of a lot of humans, but the S'pher are indiscriminate, all or nothing as far as they care.

Like I said. Middle ground. And it's a central point I've used before in bits and pieces of my own stuff from time to time. The first experience was bumpy, left a sour taste in everybody's mouth, and now they all don't want to play nice.

You keep givin' me scenarios and one day I'll end up writing a fanfic in your respective universe. You're making good room for characters, which is what I enjoy. You're the dude with the microscope on armies, I'm the dude with camera on singular people and their actions.

Good fun.


 
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The S'pher still invade Earth in 2654 but for different reason; they long ago declared themselves as justice bringers and dedicated to removing injustice from the universe. Humans were largely oppressive towards other species and are seen as offenders to this reasoning and must be eliminated.
Meh... seems like something a moralfag would write.

No, I just want reasoning better than all teh revenge and 'I'm too lazy to explain so let's just say its mysterious and ooh mystery!'

Plus I need something that isn't going to require a rewrite of 100+ documents.
Okay, it just put off that kinda... (thought I hate the term) really edgy sort of "humanity is inherently evil" line of thinking at first.

Nah. It makes more sense with context, which is my bad. Essentially, humans had bad experiences in first contact and most still harbour xenophobic opinions. When they gained power over everything due to a mixture of political blackmail and military buildup, they were quick to install pro-human policies. So kinda like if Cerberus gained full control I guess.
Uppon further consideration, I like this concept.


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Aye. I'd side with option two.

Although, you have to be careful when considering the "All Huumans r bad" trope as well. You can't win no matter what direction you take to be honest.

But your second option seems more interesting and creative. The S'pher represent an absolute. No compromise in justice or punishment. Humanity sits in a middle ground. They can be good, they can be bad. And the Sh'kaali represent chaos. But they aren't neccessirly bad.

Think about universes. Every universe, in theory, has the potential for a different set of laws. So, if one universe were to "bleed" into another, the results would be varied, potentially being benificial, or chatastrophic. If you ever read Asimov's "The God's Themselves," this will bring up the point I'm trying to make a little better.

In this scenario, I don't necessarily see the Sh'kaali as being bad, but because their universe operates on a different set of physics and laws than ours, their contact with our own universal mesh is devastating, and thus they are seen as a threat. Chaos.


I don't see many universes with the 'humans are inherently evil' reasoning. Plus, they aren't without reasoning in their actions; first contact with aliens was not peaceful and left many hateful, scared and generally pretty shitty towards other species. When they gained control due to having a good economy and general underhanded work, they were quick to install a pro-human regime. Of course, there's a militia pro-alien faction that also consists of a lot of humans, but the S'pher are indiscriminate, all or nothing as far as they care.

Like I said. Middle ground. And it's a central point I've used before in bits and pieces of my own stuff from time to time. The first experience was bumpy, left a sour taste in everybody's mouth, and now they all don't want to play nice.

You keep givin' me scenarios and one day I'll end up writing a fanfic in your respective universe. You're making good room for characters, which is what I enjoy. You're the dude with the microscope on armies, I'm the dude with camera on singular people and their actions.

Good fun.


To be fair, it's not like the aliens are saints. One species basically nuked itself twice before getting to space, another created a 300 year Siege of of the Homeworld of another species because they got bored and one captures hostage and eats them alive because that's their thing.

No one is nice in my writing. Everyone is a dick bar one species.


 
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Aye. I'd side with option two.

Although, you have to be careful when considering the "All Huumans r bad" trope as well. You can't win no matter what direction you take to be honest.

But your second option seems more interesting and creative. The S'pher represent an absolute. No compromise in justice or punishment. Humanity sits in a middle ground. They can be good, they can be bad. And the Sh'kaali represent chaos. But they aren't neccessirly bad.

Think about universes. Every universe, in theory, has the potential for a different set of laws. So, if one universe were to "bleed" into another, the results would be varied, potentially being benificial, or chatastrophic. If you ever read Asimov's "The God's Themselves," this will bring up the point I'm trying to make a little better.

In this scenario, I don't necessarily see the Sh'kaali as being bad, but because their universe operates on a different set of physics and laws than ours, their contact with our own universal mesh is devastating, and thus they are seen as a threat. Chaos.


I don't see many universes with the 'humans are inherently evil' reasoning. Plus, they aren't without reasoning in their actions; first contact with aliens was not peaceful and left many hateful, scared and generally pretty shitty towards other species. When they gained control due to having a good economy and general underhanded work, they were quick to install a pro-human regime. Of course, there's a militia pro-alien faction that also consists of a lot of humans, but the S'pher are indiscriminate, all or nothing as far as they care.

Like I said. Middle ground. And it's a central point I've used before in bits and pieces of my own stuff from time to time. The first experience was bumpy, left a sour taste in everybody's mouth, and now they all don't want to play nice.

You keep givin' me scenarios and one day I'll end up writing a fanfic in your respective universe. You're making good room for characters, which is what I enjoy. You're the dude with the microscope on armies, I'm the dude with camera on singular people and their actions.

Good fun.


To be fair, it's not like the aliens are saints. One species basically nuked itself twice before getting to space, another created a 300 year Siege of of the Homeworld of another species because they got bored and one captures hostage and eats them alive because that's their thing.

No one is nice in my writing. Everyone is a dick bar one species.

Oho! But that's the point! Never so black and white. Overarching, and at first glance, the main bulk of everybody makes them all look like shitlords. But it's the individuals, like little candles that stand out. Different perspectives me and you. You see far, I see close!