I could out-English verb tbh

Jocephalopod · January 21, 2016, 04:55:13 PM

excerpt from Verbatim's AP English paper tbh

Suddenly, John Crime slowly rose from his seat. his sweat dripping from his sweaty forehead as he slowly rose from his seat to confront the thieves. His mind raced like a race horse and churned like a river his whole body was ready to pounce like a tiger on the thief. who suddenly moved his arm in a comparable way like a starfish. Meanwhile. the night sky was dark like a black colored marker and the wind was as cold as ice.

challengerX · January 21, 2016, 05:23:16 PM

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Jocephalopod · January 21, 2016, 05:24:34 PM

Quote from: challengerX on January 21, 2016, 05:23:16 PM

Quote from: Jocephalopod on January 21, 2016, 04:55:13 PM
excerpt from Verbatim's AP English paper tbh

Suddenly, John Crime slowly rose from his seat. his sweat dripping from his sweaty forehead as he slowly rose from his seat to confront the thieves. His mind raced like a race horse and churned like a river his whole body was ready to pounce like a tiger on the thief. who suddenly moved his arm in a comparable way like a starfish. Meanwhile. the night sky was dark like a black colored marker and the wind was as cold as ice.

Simply complex and the most unique piece of magnificent minimalist writing I must say if I say so myself, if I may be so bold as to make that assertion.

suddenly, I agree with you.

Verbatim · January 21, 2016, 05:27:47 PM

Quote from: Jocephalopod on January 21, 2016, 04:55:13 PM

the night sky was dark like a black colored marker and the wind was as cold as ice.
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this bit made me chuckle