Quote from: Jocephalopod on January 21, 2016, 04:55:13 PMexcerpt from Verbatim's AP English paper tbhSuddenly, John Crime slowly rose from his seat. his sweat dripping from his sweaty forehead as he slowly rose from his seat to confront the thieves. His mind raced like a race horse and churned like a river his whole body was ready to pounce like a tiger on the thief. who suddenly moved his arm in a comparable way like a starfish. Meanwhile. the night sky was dark like a black colored marker and the wind was as cold as ice.Simply complex and the most unique piece of magnificent minimalist writing I must say if I say so myself, if I may be so bold as to make that assertion.
excerpt from Verbatim's AP English paper tbhSuddenly, John Crime slowly rose from his seat. his sweat dripping from his sweaty forehead as he slowly rose from his seat to confront the thieves. His mind raced like a race horse and churned like a river his whole body was ready to pounce like a tiger on the thief. who suddenly moved his arm in a comparable way like a starfish. Meanwhile. the night sky was dark like a black colored marker and the wind was as cold as ice.
the night sky was dark like a black colored marker and the wind was as cold as ice.[/i]
I could out-English verb tbh
