English speakers, reword this

Flee · May 09, 2016, 11:38:54 AM

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N/A · May 09, 2016, 11:43:07 AM

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Coomer · May 09, 2016, 11:43:42 AM

Dip below?

It makes sense either way

challengerX · May 09, 2016, 11:45:26 AM

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Flee · May 09, 2016, 11:53:18 AM

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The Lord Ruler · May 09, 2016, 11:55:34 AM

does not fall below

Flee · May 09, 2016, 11:57:25 AM

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Nexus · May 09, 2016, 12:00:28 PM

does not fall beneath.

Nexus · May 09, 2016, 12:01:35 PM

Is up to.

gats · May 09, 2016, 12:01:59 PM

...it is often deemed necessary for data processing in this field to be covered by a high level of data protection that niggers tongue my anus the safeguards found in general data protection instruments and prohibits the departure from fundamental principles without proper and adequate justification(125).

Nexus · May 09, 2016, 12:02:52 PM

is on par with

Verbatim · May 09, 2016, 12:05:02 PM

does not cut back on

Nexus · May 09, 2016, 12:06:23 PM

does not jew you from

Flee · May 09, 2016, 12:11:07 PM

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Verbatim · May 09, 2016, 12:20:14 PM

Quote from: Flee on May 09, 2016, 12:11:07 PM

Quote from: Verbatim on May 09, 2016, 12:05:02 PM
does not cut back on
Hmm. "Does not undercut"? Cut back from makes it sound like it regresses from what already exists.

i like that

clear, straightfoward, less wordy

Verbatim · May 09, 2016, 12:36:42 PM

if you want to deviate from the "does not" phrasing, you have quite a few options

"abides by"
"complies with"
"adheres to"

DAS B00T x2 · May 09, 2016, 12:44:29 PM

...a high level of data protection that meets or exceeds the safeguards found in

Jester · May 09, 2016, 12:46:51 PM

o shit waddup

Hahahaha very funny Zonda · May 09, 2016, 12:48:33 PM

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Flee · May 09, 2016, 12:55:41 PM

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Flee · May 09, 2016, 12:58:21 PM

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Jocephalopod · May 09, 2016, 01:09:19 PM

Deviate?

Verbatim · May 09, 2016, 01:10:24 PM

eh, i like to avoid awkward instances of rhyming/alliteration/assonance in formal writing

these ones are a little wordy, but that's my specialty

"corresponds with"
"meets the standards of"
"meets the standards set forth by"
"does not forgo"

or do away with the word "that" and say "consistent with," as in:

"...a high level of data protection consistent with the safeguards found..."'

^ i like the flow of that better, but your mileage may vary

ban me · May 09, 2016, 01:15:18 PM

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Desty · May 09, 2016, 01:19:55 PM

that does not fall under

Flee · May 09, 2016, 01:22:41 PM

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Jocephalopod · May 09, 2016, 01:23:35 PM

Ye use deviate unless you wanna rephrase the sentence

🂿 · May 09, 2016, 01:23:38 PM

Doesn't fall down.

Flee · May 09, 2016, 01:24:44 PM

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