Does anyone here write stories?

 
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The Rage....
i just write haikus
its the only thing i like
but im not a weeb


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second person writing is very hard. most of the time i see it used i cringe.
third person is probably my favorite to read, first person makes me think of a diary too much.

Sandy writes, Longface also writes.
i like first person because it enables the reader to "see" through the character's eyes, per se.
can you think of anything specific that can be done in first person you could not do in third?


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I feel like it's a waste of time. However, my brother has started writing short horror stories, and they're pretty good.


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His eyebrows sparkling, his white beard hangs down to his chest. The thatched mats, spread outside his chise, spread softly, his splendid attos. He polishes, cross-legged, his makiri, with his eyes completely absorbed.

He is Ainu.

The god of Ainu Mosir, Ae-Oine Kamuy, descendant of Okiku-Rumi, He perishes, a living corpse. The summers day, the white sunlight, unabrushed, ends simply through his breath alone.
I have a loose string of events planned out, but I've been struggling on how to get from A to B. It's one of those things that gets easier to flesh out with worldbuilding, they end up solving themselves.

Also worldbuilding is more fun. I wrote three pages today on a precursor civilization to that which appears in the game by 3000 some years, involving a few days of real historic research through studies and educational outlets for inspiration and the natural touch for cultural development.