Deci's life story part two

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mods, chill out. recognize the art of tragedies.

Deci felt the taste of everything he once loved go away. The chocolate had no rich flavor, the fizzy sodas had no sweetness.

 Religion no longer had the comforting effect it used to have after his aunt started relentlessly tormenting him.

He felt anger and shame whenever he passed by churches. The pastor saw him falling deeper and deeper into the cage of his own mind and tried to turn him away into the light. His dark brown eyes felt dread each time Deci would shake in fear and regret during the service.

In the end nothing could stop Deci's path. A former lover came to him, trying to stop him from making the decision that would end his broken life. Not even she, whom Deci once claimed could stand in the path of raining volcanic ash if she so willed, could lead him away.



In the moment he challenged all which had struck him down in events from the past, everything was calm. His hands stopped trembling. His breathing came strong and with pride. There was something about him that changed in that moment.

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But the ground had already come.

In his final moment for the first time in his short life, he smiled.

A familiar blackness filled his vision as the sound of ambulances rocked him into his final sleep


 
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The Rage....
me on the left


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Goddamn you guys. It's a beautiful story about the tragic character Deci, who could not hold the pressure of the world on his own.

It convinces the reader to look inside himself and think about times he made small errors that had critical consequences, or how life cannot be made shallow for a mere moment.


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We all think that we'll see everybody we love the next day, so it doesn't matter if we're dicks or not. And when the day comes where we don't see them again, the effects can be unpredictable.


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Nice fan fic.


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Nice fan fic.
Don't flatter yourself


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Nice fan fic.
Don't flatter yourself

It could use work though.

Like, the time Deci got jumped by 6 guys in the boys locker room  back in middle school and really couldn't defend himself because he was outnumbered as fuck.
Last Edit: May 06, 2016, 01:45:44 AM by Decimator Omega


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Nice fan fic.
Don't flatter yourself

It could use work though.

Like, the time Deci got jumped by 6 guys in the boys locker room  back in middle school and really couldn't defend himself because he was outnumbered as fuck.
Fuck those guys, man.


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Nice fan fic.
Don't flatter yourself

It could use work though.

Like, the time Deci got jumped by 6 guys in the boys locker room  back in middle school and really couldn't defend himself because he was outnumbered as fuck.
Fuck those guys, man.

I won't lie, those were dark times. Their reason? I'm a retard just for being in a couple special ed classes so I have no basic human rights in their eyes.


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Nice fan fic.
Don't flatter yourself

It could use work though.

Like, the time Deci got jumped by 6 guys in the boys locker room  back in middle school and really couldn't defend himself because he was outnumbered as fuck.
Fuck those guys, man.

I won't lie, those were dark times. Their reason? I'm a retard just for being in a couple special ed classes so I have no basic human rights in their eyes.
They're losers for them to do that to you fella


 
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"With the first link, the chain is forged. The first speech censured, the first thought forbidden, the first freedom denied, chains us all irrevocably."
—Judge Aaron Satie
——Carmen
like ourobora to ulysses the time bound hero finds himself in an eternal loop, never completing his self imposed struggle


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Nice fan fic.
Don't flatter yourself

It could use work though.

Like, the time Deci got jumped by 6 guys in the boys locker room  back in middle school and really couldn't defend himself because he was outnumbered as fuck.
Fuck those guys, man.

I won't lie, those were dark times. Their reason? I'm a retard just for being in a couple special ed classes so I have no basic human rights in their eyes.
They're losers for them to do that to you fella

I wish that wasn't the only thing that was fucked up in middle school.


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Nice fan fic.
Don't flatter yourself

It could use work though.

Like, the time Deci got jumped by 6 guys in the boys locker room  back in middle school and really couldn't defend himself because he was outnumbered as fuck.
Fuck those guys, man.

I won't lie, those were dark times. Their reason? I'm a retard just for being in a couple special ed classes so I have no basic human rights in their eyes.
They're losers for them to do that to you fella

I wish that wasn't the only thing that was fucked up in middle school.
Don't even bring that kind of shit onto here. I'm leaving it at that.


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