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I dare you to draw me in anime form.

Give me a pic of yourself and okay

You forgot that you made this already?

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Also I know what the image is suppose to represent, but I feel like the bad guy in a movie poster that blows up people's boats lol.

That's just a floating head I need more to work with than that


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Unfinished doodle of a Black Templar I made on the back of a note card about a month ago.
Drawing again reminded me of my weaknesses. I apply too much force on my pencil, making erasing much more difficult, due to the graphite smearing. Furthermore, I am definitely a perfectionist, and will start with something like a helmet and spend an enormous amount of time getting it looking as perfect as possible, before doing anything else. 

That, and I only ever draw things wearing helmets. I don't think I've ever drawn anything without a helmet.

First try.



I am sorry it's taken so.long for me to get back to you, it kept slipping my mind.

Your shading is good, but the lines, and proportions in general are kind of inconsistent.

As for the details, that's more up to the artist, but if you were explicitly drawing a Black Templar, rather than just a black space marine, the details aren't very Templar-y. The gold trim is a bit too fluid and "swirly" I suppose. Looks vaguely Chaos-y, especially Slaneeshi.

Sorry if I come.off as overly critical, that isn't at all my intention.

Oh, and your Roboute Guilliman, AKA Big Bobby G, is fantastic.


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Unfinished doodle of a Black Templar I made on the back of a note card about a month ago.
Drawing again reminded me of my weaknesses. I apply too much force on my pencil, making erasing much more difficult, due to the graphite smearing. Furthermore, I am definitely a perfectionist, and will start with something like a helmet and spend an enormous amount of time getting it looking as perfect as possible, before doing anything else. 

That, and I only ever draw things wearing helmets. I don't think I've ever drawn anything without a helmet.

First try.



I am sorry it's taken so.long for me to get back to you, it kept slipping my mind.

Your shading is good, but the lines, and proportions in general are kind of inconsistent.

As for the details, that's more up to the artist, but if you were explicitly drawing a Black Templar, rather than just a black space marine, the details aren't very Templar-y. The gold trim is a bit too fluid and "swirly" I suppose. Looks vaguely Chaos-y, especially Slaneeshi.

Sorry if I come.off as overly critical, that isn't at all my intention.

Oh, and your Roboute Guilliman, AKA Big Bobby G, is fantastic.


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I lied, I'm not impressed. But then again, I'm a tough audience.
Toyotaro is really talented. At drawing, at least. Doing my best to recreate some of his best work lately. Love the way he draws Goku's hair.



Also trying out some mew shading techniques with limited success. Hopefully I can improve upon them in the future.


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i haven't draw much lately but fortunately summer's just a few days away and im hoping to be a lot more productive then

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Woah your drawing looks really good


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Woah your drawing looks really good
thank you fellow gamer


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i think youre developing habits that actually makes the anatomy worse

the way you draw noses may look fine from the side but were you to draw a face that was facing the screen, how would you go about it

highlights from the eyes are supposed to come from one light source, it makes your eyes look cross-eyed if you give them separate directions unless the light source is close (then it would converge, but never diverge)



you also dont seem to understand the reason for the indent between the collar bones is the collar bones themselves, and tbh looking in the mirror would tell you this



necks also have an angled potrusion that goes down towards this indent, unlike the rectangular necks you draw



if youre drawing collar bones i at least suspect you want them to represent a human's so i would not say this is a stylistic choice; neck size and shape would be

your lines are good but i feel l ike youre getting worse with the faces, im not sure how many tutorials or things like that you look at but if there arent many other artists criticizing your work it could be self destructive to the learning process

theres a saying that goes learn the rules before you break them; if youre trying a similar style to kushinovs art, he did a lot of life drawing and still life before he started doing his own work, and maybe you wont notice it now, but it pays off, and youll see it in your art; then when you go to look back at your old stuff, namely these, youll know exactly what you did wrong


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i think youre developing habits that actually makes the anatomy worse

the way you draw noses may look fine from the side but were you to draw a face that was facing the screen, how would you go about it

highlights from the eyes are supposed to come from one light source, it makes your eyes look cross-eyed if you give them separate directions unless the light source is close (then it would converge, but never diverge)



you also dont seem to understand the reason for the indent between the collar bones is the collar bones themselves, and tbh looking in the mirror would tell you this



necks also have an angled potrusion that goes down towards this indent, unlike the rectangular necks you draw



if youre drawing collar bones i at least suspect you want them to represent a human's so i would not say this is a stylistic choice; neck size and shape would be

your lines are good but i feel l ike youre getting worse with the faces, im not sure how many tutorials or things like that you look at but if there arent many other artists criticizing your work it could be self destructive to the learning process

theres a saying that goes learn the rules before you break them; if youre trying a similar style to kushinovs art, he did a lot of life drawing and still life before he started doing his own work, and maybe you wont notice it now, but it pays off, and youll see it in your art; then when you go to look back at your old stuff, namely these, youll know exactly what you did wrong
Props for the crits.

The highlight issue is a matter of sketching fast. The reason I say I see improvement is that the last sketch was done in maybe a quarter of the time I would usually take. I've been trying to achieve a comparable level in a much shorter amount of time. I guess so I can get down what I know quickly and move on to correcting what mistakes I'm making. I actually did notice that the left highlight on the eye was over slightly more left than the right was, but the difference wasn't so huge that it bothered me all that much in regards to what I was trying to accomplish anyways.

With shoulders and collar bones, it's a matter of me not practicing them because I run out of room, (I sketch too big, another thing I need to work on) so they just become a place holder to make the head look less floaty. I virtually always have an issue with them and sometimes just leave the head looking floaty anyways. I figure though I should at least try them, wrong as they are, to work towards figuring them out even if it's at a very slow pace for now. I didn't draw collar bones in that sketch literally because I didn't want to do it because I didn't think they would look any good. I just thought the area looked too empty without anything so I sketched the indent without them.

I realize I've got a long way to go with proportions and proper anatomy, so I will go over and try to remember everything you've said. You're literally the only person at all that looks at my shit critically, so thanks for real. It's actually something I long for pretty desperately.

Also, I'm not necessarily purposefully going for a style like kuvshinov's, he's just one inspiration among many for me, like Runshin, Filipe Aguiar, Ross Tran, Anthulu, the list goes on. I have more of an affinity for drawing rounder female faces, specifically the jaw line and the nose, ( I just love drawing flowing curves, even when I sketch graffiti) and I think that's why kushinov's work may influence me more than others.
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im glad you took it well but some of this stuff you should work towards being able to do without even thinking about it when proper anatomy (stylized or not, you will be able to tell) becomes habit

not saying you only have one artist to go from, just giving an example, many of those artists will have had the same groundwork
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im glad you took it well but some of this stuff you should work towards being able to do without even thinking about it when proper anatomy (stylized or not, you will be able to tell) becomes habit

not saying you only have one artist to go from, just giving an example, many of those artists will have had the same groundwork
Word. Essentially I've been procrastinating studying anatomy to the full and proper extent. I have an amazing book on it (this one here) but I haven't gone through it like I should, and I've yet to find a good source of references. Going to classes certainly isn't an option for me. I avoid using myself because I don't really like looking at my sickly frail body all that long.

I'm going to have to just bite the bullet soon and get started.