Read my fucking immigration paper you fucks

 
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This is the way the world ends. Not with a bang but a whimper.
It's here, 2.5 pages long.

Looking for comments on the style, readability, whether I've sourced enough, et cetera. Don't feel like you need to read all of it if you don't want to, just enough for you to get a general feel of it.
Last Edit: August 25, 2014, 04:05:56 PM by Meta Cognition

 
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We knew the world would not be the same.
A few people laughed, a few people cried, most people were silent.
I remembered the line from the Hindu scripture, the Bhagavad-Gita.
Vishnu is trying to persuade the Prince that he should do his duty
and to impress him takes on his multi-armed form and says,
"Now, I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds.."
I suppose we all thought that one way or another.
33 pages? Good lord.

Wait I think I was confused.
Last Edit: August 25, 2014, 04:33:25 PM by Nuka

 
 
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Quote from: Meta Cognition on August 25, 2014, 03:46:40 PM
Just finishing off a nearly-three-page essay on the impacts of immigration and how to deal with it. If I post this in a Google doc, will you guys read it?
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Just finishing off a nearly-three-page essay on the impacts of immigration and how to deal with it
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a nearly-three-page essay
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<.<
I'll read it while I drink my tea <.<

 
 
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I'll read it while I drink my tea <.<
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It's a great essay <.<

I'm not the one to look for grammatical shite because I hate that stuff but content wise it's well structured and well cited >.> However, it could just be because I have to do this crap relentlessly but do you need a list of references? Or is that not necessary/not included? >.>

 
 
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Quote from: Mr Psychologist on August 25, 2014, 04:29:36 PM
It's a great essay <.<

I'm not the one to look for grammatical shite because I hate that stuff but content wise it's well structured and well cited >.> However, it could just be because I have to do this crap relentlessly but do you need a list of references? Or is that not necessary/not included? >.>

I have a bibliography, I just didn't upload it with the google doc.

 
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Quote from: Lady Noelle on August 25, 2014, 06:41:09 PM
Why the fuck is it all squished together?

It looks normal to me, I think it might just be a UK/US thing here <.<
Are your essays normally all spaced out?

 
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Quote from: Mr Psychologist on August 25, 2014, 06:48:55 PM
It looks normal to me, I think it might just be a UK/US thing here <.<
Are your essays normally all spaced out?
Overspaced, I'd say. There's so much fucking blank space in MLA formatting that it's rediculous.

 
 
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Quote from: Lady Noelle on August 25, 2014, 06:50:50 PM
Yes, so that you can actually read them. Put a space between every paragraph.

Ah yes, I didn't notice that. I would put spaces in paragraphs but I loathe spacing it MLA style. It's such a wasteful way of printing and it's slow to extract information from <.<

 
 
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I liked it. Could have used more sauce though.