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« on: August 10, 2015, 05:56:11 PM »
I'm at work on break, getting off at 9. Then I'll do some shopping and then go to the gym. Then just chill after that (probably smoke).
632
« on: August 10, 2015, 04:32:45 PM »
Challenger went from 0 to 100.
633
« on: August 10, 2015, 04:09:30 PM »
Just really bad trolls or people with nothing nice to say. People like loaf, psu, that nick guy, and some others I'm sure. I don't spend a ton of time here but there's probably at least a dozen childish people that don't help this already small forum.
Suck my dick fag
Didn't you already reply to this comment with another dumb insult? You're sad, bruh.
And you're a nobody on the website and in real life,bruh
Haha, you and I both know you know nothing about my life. But what we do know is you've been the clown/troll of the forum for what I've read was years, which hints at how pathetic your real life is, and I bet you'll continue it too. Swerve.
634
« on: August 10, 2015, 02:23:51 PM »
I feel like they'll actually make some attempt to do it. ISIS just doesn't care about consequences. At all.
635
« on: August 10, 2015, 02:20:56 PM »
I stole a snickers bar once when I was little, does that count?
Yes.
636
« on: August 10, 2015, 02:19:37 PM »
Just really bad trolls or people with nothing nice to say. People like loaf, psu, that nick guy, and some others I'm sure. I don't spend a ton of time here but there's probably at least a dozen childish people that don't help this already small forum.
Suck my dick fag
Didn't you already reply to this comment with another dumb insult? You're sad, bruh.
637
« on: August 10, 2015, 01:14:46 AM »
A large ass roll of a carpet. I literally just walked out with it.
Tell me the full hilarious, incredible story of this.
Mother asked me to get some carpet for my room.
So I went to the store, picked the most dank carpet I could and walked up to the till. I was with a friend and he went in line before me with his snacks. Of course we were chatting and after he paid for his shit I just walked out of the store with him, pass the till.
After like 5 mins of going back home I noticed that I didn't pay for the carpet. I lol'd it off and so did he.
and that's how I accidentally shoplifted a carpet roll.
Being nonchalant will usually be the best way to steal things. If you look guilty you usually are. I bet you saved a shit ton of money on that carpet too.
638
« on: August 10, 2015, 12:55:20 AM »
No because I have respect for other people's property.
Omg so noble. Never tampered with anyone's property ever. Just too noble.
639
« on: August 09, 2015, 06:37:32 PM »
No, because I'm not poor
You don't have to be poor to shoplift you dumb sack.
i never said you have to be
I thought you were implying it was a poor mans hobby.
640
« on: August 09, 2015, 06:36:33 PM »
No, but you could drop sick bars regarding your candy hustling experience
Want me to spit more fire, huh?
641
« on: August 09, 2015, 06:31:47 PM »
No, because I'm not poor
You don't have to be poor to shoplift you dumb sack.
642
« on: August 08, 2015, 06:53:29 PM »
If so what? I remember when I was 12 me and my friend stole a shit ton of candy from this water park. And I also lifted some toothpaste a couple of times, but who wants to pay four dollars for tooth paste? But no really what have you lifted?
643
« on: August 08, 2015, 01:50:58 AM »
I'm about to go in. Stop
This is the beginning I have yet to perfect my wordplay And you never will lol
I care not what you say, I turn the cheek like messiah Then wrote a wall of text that barely rhymes like the messiah
The dash reads 100 I'm coming up faster than China China's growth is bullshit.
I spit so much I might need to see a dentist, what
my ego is titanium you cannot dent this "I'm humble but also have a huge ego and I need to go to the dentist"
You cannot win this, you niggas are sloppy like a French kiss LOL
I didn't want want to drop a nuke but I see they want to make me MAD Semi decent
This is very sad, a question was all that I had, they say I am a cancer and now I will break bad Cringy
I want the throne like Caesar, I rise above like Jesus on Easter So you start with this
I have holy rhymes, a divine grind, an ill mind I hop, son
I hate how people take shots like they have an automatic gun And the next two end in the "un" sound? Try actually saying this out loud, it doesn't flow and sounds terrible.
I can see myself with an agent, all of you to me are agents
I'm in the Matrix, I am the one thus you cannot hide or run Apart from how weak and generic this part is, you should aim to start your own company like a lot successful rappers are doing now so you don't get shafted.
Oh my god I'm in for the attack from all of these haters This barely makes sense. And stop saying "oh my god".
My rhymes will blow your mind and have you breathing heavy like chronic masturbators What's your style supposed to be? Joke kiddy bullshit like Eminem or what? Ideally you should be doing your own thing but your rhyming is out of whack that you don't really have a style or a certain way your shit flows.
OMG Stop
I cook I'm like a baker, Bakers bake. They don't cook. Weak wordplay.
fuck all of you haters, We heard you the first 10 times.
you guys are so fruity like cheap Now and Laters The idea behind this one is meh but the way you wrote is so lame.
Please do me a favor and just sign a waiver cause you will be bodies, Say this one out loud. It's too long, doesn't make sense, and sounds like you're talking.
There's a reason rappers rap like "I be doing bla bla bla" even though they're articulate and know "I be" is incorrect English. It just sounds better.
please go pray to your savior LOL
Do you realize how short this line is in comparisons to the last 3, and especially in comparison to the one it's supposed be rhyming with? Not only that, you keep changing your rhythm.
God damn I'm colder than February, I say again you I will bury Yeah see this is what happens when you listen to Drake.
I am the grim reaper your fate is scary, my bars so heavy this weight you cannot carry This is seriously the weakest stuff I've ever heard.
Fuck being nice I'll pop off a massacre, I'll storm you like ISIS I hit you with lightning, this will be a disaster Oh boy where do I begin.
Massacre doesn't rhyme with disaster. If anything you should've had something along the lines of "natural disaster" of your next word was going to be "storm".
ISIS and lightning don't rhyme. At all. And again the whole thing just sounds terrible. It doesn't flow.
Also, who exactly is your target audience? Nazis and Islamic extremists? Why can't you say "I'm like a bomb/natural disaster" instead of "I'm like Adolf/ISIS". It just shows you come up with the wackiest shit because you have nothing people can relate to because you're basically rapping out a violent fantasy and you've never been around enough violence to be able to paint a good picture through a rap.
Try something else.
OMG ✋
I'm more precise than complex chemistry, fuck dominoes I am the king of delivery Slightly better here, but again it's just nonsense that kinda rhymes.
They focus on the small lines and ignore the ill bars, it's sick, When 80% to 90% of your lines suck, the whole thing sucks.
I'm like Tony Montana I read this shit and my eye is scared Fucking what
I have yet to see a decent reply because it's something yall don't got
I guess you listened when your mama said don't touch fire, I am too hot.
Basically sounds like you're talking here.
Stop making these pathetic diss songs. Try writing something from the heart and try to tell a story, and work on your wordplay. And I mean REALLY work on your wordplay. Try matching it to a good beat and post the lyrics and the beat.
If you can do that and you show improvement and that you can actually deliver a message to people and paint a picture with your rhymes? Then you should consider that you can rap. Otherwise? You stink.
Much respect for this advice. I needed it, and I'll use it.
644
« on: August 06, 2015, 10:43:50 PM »
lol
you can't rhyme agent with agents
just stop
That's all you got? Stay bodied.
645
« on: August 06, 2015, 08:59:36 PM »
I SAID B8ED BREATH MOTHER FUCKER.
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didn't see the edit. Use a new post next time so I get notifications. Make me search for this stuff.
My bad, mane. I thought it was nice to have at the top of the page.
646
« on: August 06, 2015, 08:57:50 PM »
647
« on: August 06, 2015, 08:57:01 PM »
"I'm not a troll"
-PSU
I just I don't see why he still bothers. I guess dude gets bored a lot.
Is this the serious forum? Oh shit, my bad.
The problem is, my dude, that we can never take you seriously. This isn't shade, it's just the name of the game.
648
« on: August 06, 2015, 08:42:24 PM »
I'm about to go in.
This is the beginning I have yet to perfect my wordplay
I care not what you say, I turn the cheek like messiah
The dash reads 100 I'm coming up faster than China
I spit so much I might need to see a dentist, my ego is titanium you cannot dent this
You cannot win this, you niggas are sloppy like a French kiss
I didn't want want to drop a nuke but I see they want to make me MAD
This is very sad, a question was all that I had, they say I am a cancer and now I will break bad
I want the throne like Caesar, I rise above like Jesus on Easter
I have holy rhymes, a divine grind, an ill mind I hop, son
I hate how people take shots like they have an automatic gun
I can see myself with an agent, all of you to me are agents
I'm in the Matrix, I am the one thus you cannot hide or run
Oh my god I'm in for the attack from all of these haters
My rhymes will blow your mind and have you breathing heavy like chronic masturbators
OMG I cook I'm like a baker, fuck all of you haters, you guys are so fruity like cheap Now and Laters
Please do me a favor and just sign a waiver cause you will be bodies, please go pray to your savior
God damn I'm colder than February, I say again you I will bury
I am the grim reaper your fate is scary, my bars so heavy this weight you cannot carry
Fuck being nice I'll pop off a massacre, I'll storm you like ISIS I hit you with lightning, this will be a disaster
OMG I'm more precise than complex chemistry, fuck dominoes I am the king of delivery
They focus on the small lines and ignore the ill bars, it's sick, I'm like Tony Montana I read this shit and my eye is scared
I have yet to see a decent reply because it's something yall don't got
I guess you listened when your mama said don't touch fire, I am too hot.
649
« on: August 06, 2015, 04:05:26 PM »
Yeah. I'm trying to learn new stuff and make more advanced meals as well.
650
« on: August 06, 2015, 03:39:19 PM »
Okay sly I guess I'll have to cook a bit and come back with some bars. But let's collab though.
651
« on: August 06, 2015, 03:38:22 PM »
So you're just eating straight cheese? Those bowels though.
652
« on: August 06, 2015, 03:37:05 PM »
"I'm not a troll"
-PSU
I just I don't see why he still bothers. I guess dude gets bored a lot.
653
« on: August 05, 2015, 11:24:11 PM »
All I read was "spit more fire". I'm gonna come back hard after I take some bong rips and listen to music to get some inspiration. 
654
« on: August 05, 2015, 10:26:01 PM »
Oh they can show love for sly's bars while I'm dropping platinum bars encrusted in diamond. That's okay, the hating makes me stronger. His bars was fire though.
But anyway OVO stands for Octobers very own. It's drakes label and synonymous with his squad.
because sly's were good
yours weren't
My bars were way better. I already dropped the line about you losing credibility since you talked shit about drake. I can't expect you to know good wordplay and bars. The hating just fuels the drive.
But no really I don't see anything wrong with it. It could be better but it seems alright for something written in six minutes.
#OVO, 6ix
lol
dude you don't get to rate your own, because it's your own
This is true. Man fuck it, I'm going to put in some work on a beat and then go in.
I'm like the Kraken this hatin has woken me. I'm like hitler all this negativity I cannot see.
Hitler was actually very responsive to criticism and was known to make rash and irrational judgments because of it, the most notable examples being the removal of Guderian from active service and the ordered suicide of Erwin Rommel for his lose ties to the perpetrators of the July 20 plot.
It was more of a wordplay thing as opposed to a metaphor.
it's just a fucking stupid line
There's no word play to "I'm like hitler"
Fuck you mean? Do you not understand the link between hitter and cannot see? Not see sounds like nazi. I see my bars are too advanced for you. Like I've said, I've transcended beyond you haters.
Nigga you got that from the "I did nazi that coming" meme
You aren't clever and a lame ass joke doesn't make up for the fact you said you were like fucking hitler
I came up with it in literally three seconds. If you want to see some work you can see my diss to challenger. Like straight fire bars for 20 or something lines. But it's like drake say, "Fuck any nigga that's talking that shit just to get a reaction." I know I spit fire and I ain't even trying. When I release my mix tape it'll be like when Kendrick went in on control. This guy tyger is trying to come at me like a wild cat My words are flowing like water so you better bounce back Young and ambitious and I'm working to grant all these wishes End of the summer but I'm getting warmer and warmer The fall is coming but I'm rising above the stratosphere I say again fuck the haters, my skills are too clear
655
« on: August 05, 2015, 10:10:24 PM »
Oh they can show love for sly's bars while I'm dropping platinum bars encrusted in diamond. That's okay, the hating makes me stronger. His bars was fire though.
But anyway OVO stands for Octobers very own. It's drakes label and synonymous with his squad.
because sly's were good
yours weren't
My bars were way better. I already dropped the line about you losing credibility since you talked shit about drake. I can't expect you to know good wordplay and bars. The hating just fuels the drive.
But no really I don't see anything wrong with it. It could be better but it seems alright for something written in six minutes.
#OVO, 6ix
lol
dude you don't get to rate your own, because it's your own
This is true. Man fuck it, I'm going to put in some work on a beat and then go in.
I'm like the Kraken this hatin has woken me. I'm like hitler all this negativity I cannot see.
Hitler was actually very responsive to criticism and was known to make rash and irrational judgments because of it, the most notable examples being the removal of Guderian from active service and the ordered suicide of Erwin Rommel for his lose ties to the perpetrators of the July 20 plot.
It was more of a wordplay thing as opposed to a metaphor.
it's just a fucking stupid line
There's no word play to "I'm like hitler"
Fuck you mean? Do you not understand the link between hitter and cannot see? Not see sounds like nazi. I see my bars are too advanced for you. Like I've said, I've transcended beyond you haters.
656
« on: August 05, 2015, 09:58:09 PM »
Oh they can show love for sly's bars while I'm dropping platinum bars encrusted in diamond. That's okay, the hating makes me stronger. His bars was fire though.
But anyway OVO stands for Octobers very own. It's drakes label and synonymous with his squad.
because sly's were good
yours weren't
My bars were way better. I already dropped the line about you losing credibility since you talked shit about drake. I can't expect you to know good wordplay and bars. The hating just fuels the drive.
But no really I don't see anything wrong with it. It could be better but it seems alright for something written in six minutes.
#OVO, 6ix
lol
dude you don't get to rate your own, because it's your own
This is true. Man fuck it, I'm going to put in some work on a beat and then go in.
I'm like the Kraken this hatin has woken me. I'm like hitler all this negativity I cannot see.
Hitler was actually very responsive to criticism and was known to make rash and irrational judgments because of it, the most notable examples being the removal of Guderian from active service and the ordered suicide of Erwin Rommel for his lose ties to the perpetrators of the July 20 plot.
It was more of a wordplay thing as opposed to a metaphor.
657
« on: August 05, 2015, 09:56:23 PM »
Based on your "bars" I hope this is a fucking joke thread oh my god
You know my bars are fire.
658
« on: August 05, 2015, 09:56:00 PM »
Did you just compare yourself to Hitler.
All this negativity I cannot see. I cannot see. Not see.
659
« on: August 05, 2015, 09:38:04 PM »
Oh they can show love for sly's bars while I'm dropping platinum bars encrusted in diamond. That's okay, the hating makes me stronger. His bars was fire though.
But anyway OVO stands for Octobers very own. It's drakes label and synonymous with his squad.
because sly's were good
yours weren't
My bars were way better. I already dropped the line about you losing credibility since you talked shit about drake. I can't expect you to know good wordplay and bars. The hating just fuels the drive.
But no really I don't see anything wrong with it. It could be better but it seems alright for something written in six minutes.
#OVO, 6ix
lol
dude you don't get to rate your own, because it's your own
This is true. Man fuck it, I'm going to put in some work on a beat and then go in. I'm like the Kraken this hatin has woken me. I'm like hitler all this negativity I cannot see.
660
« on: August 05, 2015, 12:43:39 PM »
I had to get mine taken out when I was 16 or they would grow into my jaw.
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