Big Boss's Pokemon Nuzlocke Comic: Part 27: The Battle with Wattson (Conclusion)

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Jacob Potila was actually a Jacob Flotilla of lies.- WarTurkey
And hopefully I'll improve my style as it goes on. I think it's already on the right track but I've never attempted something like this before. What I might do is occasionally a whole page in colour, if it's a big appropriate moment.


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Part 5 added
might want to remove part 3 from the title


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might want to remove part 3 from the title

oops

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I like the part with the Pokemon


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Jacob Potila was actually a Jacob Flotilla of lies.- WarTurkey
same tbh


I won't go overboard with it but I'm going to throw in references to other things I like every once in a while when it's appropriate

Like if one of my best team members dies I'll do a panel of me wearing a beret saluting its grave


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Jacob Potila was actually a Jacob Flotilla of lies.- WarTurkey
I forgot to heal after the May fight and my Torchic is at low health


Some dude just challenged me


FUCCCCCC
Good luck

it's moments like this that produce the best material

Well I didn't die but I think I have an angel on my shoulder because something incredible happened

It is in part 7


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Just realized I accidentally wrote part 8 on it


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RIP Wade

Protip: When it comes to training shrimpy 'mons, I'd recommend switch training them until they learn at least another move.

I don't wanna influence you too much, but yeah, that'll save you a lot of avoidable deaths.

Also, maybe I'm just blind, but your dialogue can be a little difficult to read in certain panels. The letters kinda squish together, and I have to take a moment to figure out what it says. Maybe increase the panel size to give you more room?


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RIP Wade

Protip: When it comes to training shrimpy 'mons, I'd recommend switch training them until they learn at least another move.

I don't wanna influence you too much, but yeah, that'll save you a lot of avoidable deaths.

Also, maybe I'm just blind, but your dialogue can be a little difficult to read in certain panels. The letters kinda squish together, and I have to take a moment to figure out what it says. Maybe increase the panel size to give you more room?

I do try with the text but my tablet is being kind of unresponsive. I'm thinking about possibly switching to the text tool instead so it's a bit clearer.

Might just restart the program and see if it speeds up a bit.

And yeah I'm grinding a bit so I don't just immediately faint as soon as I begin. Wade dying was really unexpected though...


 
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Also, format-wise, I recommend that you name each spoiler tag, like so:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8

you don't have to, but i think it looks a lot cleaner
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Jacob Potila was actually a Jacob Flotilla of lies.- WarTurkey
Also, format-wise, I recommend that you name each spoiler tag, like so:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8

you don't have to, but i think it looks a lot cleaner

Fuck I never actually knew how to do a named spoiler

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A salt Rifle
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I tried drawing a pokemon trainer, I think It came out alright
Pretty alright. You've got a good grasp on proportions and relative scale especially.


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Training? Why even nuzlock if you're not gunna yolo suicide mission it


 
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Jacob Potila was actually a Jacob Flotilla of lies.- WarTurkey
Training? Why even nuzlock if you're not gunna yolo suicide mission it

I don't want to immediately die


If I catch a level 4 at the end of a route right before the next down it'll be a bit pointless, I at least want to be a similar level to the next area


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What ability does Marill have?


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What ability does Marill have?

I don't think I ever actually checked, I'll have a look in a bit


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Thick Fat


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So any feedback so far
the corny humor is great and really reminiscent of the original nuzlock

Keep it up


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the corny humor is great and really reminiscent of the original nuzlock

Keep it up

gr8


any suggestions on how to improve?

Other than neater text


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The text is the only thing. If you can't or don't want to write neater just space the letters more and write a bit bigger


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I'll work on that